Fic: The Inheritor (An Epilogue) -- Sherlock/John, Mycroft, PG-13

Feb 19, 2011 17:35

Title: The Inheritor
Characters/Pairings: Sherlock/John, Mycroft
Warnings: None
Notes: This is a Mycroft-POV epilogue of sorts to " Dissolution." It will make some sense, but not total sense, without reading that first.
Length: About 2,000 words

The Inheritor )

fic, sherlock bbc, sherlock, sherlock/john, john/sherlock

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fireblooms February 20 2011, 17:02:03 UTC
Mycroft thinks for a moment. “Do you understand what it will mean to him?”

“God, I hope so,” he says. “I want to, Mycroft,” he murmurs. “More than I ever have, I want to understand.”

I just. I loved this exchange so much. This entire epilogue (though I will admit to being disappointed in not seeing the proposal! haha). Mycroft and Sherlock's relationship has always intrigued me and I'm so glad you added this tiny peek.

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thingsbaker February 20 2011, 19:52:57 UTC
It seems like trying to understand would be the big first step for Sherlock. I'm glad that came through OK! Thanks for reading.

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boobabycluebaby February 20 2011, 22:34:49 UTC
“I did, of course, make inquiries, but you were most discreet.”
“I will take that as a compliment.” He nods when Mycroft lifts the bottle. “I expected your men on my doorstep nearly every day.”
“A compliment repaid.” Mycroft pours them both shallow glasses of his best.

I loved this exchange; so very like them. Your writing is astounding. You have the character's voices down so well it's truly awesome.

I also liked the line about Sherlock gulping as he did when he was a child, and that Mycroft was Sherlock's only friend growing up. I love the emotion Mycroft has with the pen. And the arm hug - Aww!. I adored the line about Sherlock now having humanity and humility.

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linkedfingers February 21 2011, 23:41:55 UTC
Just wanted to say I have been so impressed with this series - such wonderful characterisations, and matching dialogue that fits and falls perfectly. A really clever, interesting plot, a good handful of angst thrown in and a happy ending, the whole of which we don't have to see to appreciate. My favourite recipe! You're a cordon bleu. Thank you!

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mariole February 22 2011, 06:34:55 UTC
I really enjoyed this series. It was moving and thoughtful. Lovely work.

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cloudtrader February 26 2011, 21:53:51 UTC
What a lovely epilogue!

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