The thing about a shark, it's got lifeless eyes...

Jun 27, 2006 12:01

Early this morning I awoke queasy and sweating in my swampy room after only a few hours sleep. I looked about at the miscellaneous collection of collectibles and garbage strewn across the floor and I almost threw up. How could I live like this? How could I live in a filthy mess not fit for a pig? A filthy mess that mirrors my own filthy soul ( Read more... )

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seraphito June 27 2006, 19:25:27 UTC
Very nice work, Joseph, quite insightful...

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thirdeyevision June 28 2006, 01:50:22 UTC
I am so very glad you thought so, Mr. Chavez!

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you rock katy_arizona June 27 2006, 19:44:10 UTC
I have been in AP english classes for years and hardly ever does an essay actually contain analysis as this one does. i was a little weary at the begining because it was heavily summary but then bam, analysis! i give you a high 7 on the AP rubric. awesome job!

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Re: you rock thirdeyevision June 28 2006, 01:49:46 UTC
I am not understand wut that mean. I took basic english classes and am not familiar with the AP rubric. But I am guessing seven is satisfactory at least. So I thank you, darlin'. MUAH! This wasn't really an essay, though... it's not pretty and formatted enough.

Even though I just gave away all of this movie we should still watch it because it's awesome.

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