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hpchick March 26 2005, 07:55:36 UTC
Interesting start. I'm anxious to read the rest.

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thirdgorchbro March 26 2005, 19:15:41 UTC
Thank you! I hope to post one part at least weekly, if not more often.

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ludditerobot March 26 2005, 16:25:29 UTC
That's certainly a start. I'm putting it into my memories, and you will finish it.

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thirdgorchbro March 26 2005, 19:16:01 UTC
Sir yes sir!

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4thdixiechick March 28 2005, 00:35:26 UTC
I'm here via ludditerobot.

Very interesting start, but you can't just leave us hanging!
Looking forward to more

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a2zmom March 28 2005, 18:24:28 UTC
Very promising start. I like the feelings of isolation and sadness here, you really see how much Xander is drifting.

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physicsteach March 28 2005, 22:53:16 UTC
Very good potrayal of Xander trying to keep things together but not quite knowing how.

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