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[thirdonebetween]

and i say it's all right (part II)
panic! at the disco; brendon/spencer
we_are_cities july 31 07 & aug 18 07
pg-13; 11,179 words. for maddy.
( part I)

Comments

[pieces]

ILU. ♥

(You know how I fail at good comments. So this is all you're getting.)

[thirdonebetween]

(and that is all i need ♥)

you have stolen my soul

[anonymous]

I haven't read many fics that made me want to leave a comment, but I couldn't not on this.
When I read the beginning, I thought "Another Ryan's married to an evil witch and Brendon saves him and they find out how deeply they are in love fic". I continued reading and was so pleasantly surprised by how the story unfolded.
It's realistic, it hurts and it ends with the possibility of happy--but nothing is written in stone.
I would like to leave a big long comment detailing everything I liked and basically telling you are amazing, but I"m not that good at that sort of thing. Let me just say, you are a writer. A true writer. The kind who, upon reading something of theirs, make you grab a pen and write something.

Re: you have stolen my soul

[anonymous]

grr, cut myself off. that last bit was supposed to read: "The kind who, upon reading something of theirs, makes you grab a pen and write something--because you can't not." Or something to that effect.

[callsigns]

That ending was really nice and soft and perfect. I loved the journey of this fic, and how it brought them home again.

[thirdonebetween]

thank you very much. writing this, i honestly didn't know exactly how i was gonna end it -- and then that happened, and i looked over it and went, "huh. all right!" true story :)

[warmingweather]

This story absolutely smashed my heart in to little tiny pieces and then put it back together again. I wish I could give more coherent feedback, but that's all I have for now. This was so beautiful.

[thirdonebetween]

wow, thank you. i'm so glad you liked it (and that your heart got put back together, because broken hearts are no good for anyone!)

[alwayseven]

Oh this is absolutely GORGEOUS.

The tone is sort of sad and bittersweet and you have this really simple but beautiful style of writing. I just had this feeling through the whole thing like I was holding my breath because I didn't want to ruin the stillness. It was just beautifu, thank you so much.

[thirdonebetween]

thank you! ♥ i get that a lot, that i have a really simple style of writing, and i'm actually very self-conscious of it while i'm writing, but then it seems like it ends up working anyway? which makes me happy! thank you for the lovely comment!