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[thirdonebetween]

"it may be a side effect of the exposure, but i am thinking it's meant to be"
for the fic imitates music prompt challenge
fall out boy, pete/patrick
pg-13, 5,821 words

Comments

[girlintheband]

oh darling, darling this is brilliant. it flows so naturally, and the text messages are perfect. you've got pete's voice spot on. everything was so believable. i love this to pieces. ♥

small typo! He likes his desks in the backs of classrooms, paying just enough attetion to keep decent grades, ignoring the jocks when they high-five over his head like he’s not even there.

[thirdonebetween]

eee thank you ♥ this was one of the most enjoyable things to write that i've worked on in a long time, so it makes me really happy for other people to like it! i'm not sure if it really fits the mood of the song too precisely, but pete and his chronic txting took over my brain and i could not ignore him (and neither could patrick). oh, pete. ♥

thank you for pointing it out! ♥♥ it is le fixed now.

[figletofvenice]

I love it when you write, can I just say that much? I love love love all the texting, and Pete, and this. I've told you that I feel like writing anything with Pete as a main character is pretty difficult, and that I am envious of anyone who can do it well, right? So, count yourself among the envied. ♥

This piece of dialogue is possibly my favorite thing, like, ever: I dunno, sometimes I just get too full of thoughts about you and I have to text you so I don’t explode with joy out of the sheer fact that you exist.
Because, y'know, that's kind of how I feel all the time. (Like, this whole fandom? Too ridiculously adorable for words.) And just. Awww.

Also, I located another typo while I was reading, but then I lost it. Luckily the find function in firefox is kind of awesome, so - The i found you the most awesomest hat todays make him smile so much he’s afriad his teachers will think something’s wrong. (afraid, not afriad?) ♥

[thirdonebetween]

well, you know what, I love it when YOU write, so you should DO IT MORE D:<

to me, pete as a main character is not too difficult, but pete's pov is an extremely draining experience. therefore, I stick to patrick!

ahahaha yay, I love that line too ♥ I AM JUST PROJECTING MY OWN THOUGHTS THROUGH PETE, OK, THERE IS NOTHING WRONG WITH THAT. but, eeeeeee, thank you, ilu my maddy, you make me smile ♥♥♥

TYPOS SHMYPOS. i mean, thank you for telling me!

[shallowesque]

*happy squeaking noises* That was adorable, and so very yes, and the texting, and Patrick is tiny and keeps getting caught, and yey!

Although you are missing a quotation mark somewhere. I think the line about Patrick's mum being happy he's not a loser?

[thirdonebetween]

HELLO YOU ♥♥♥ also, thank you yay i am glad you liked it!

ahahaha i love how the first three comments to this are like, this was really awesome but HAY LOOK TYPO. you'd think with the number of times i looked through it, and the number of times i forced OTHER people to read it, all of them would be caught by now, but no, of course not. ♥ i will find it!

[greenet]

Adorable. Just, really, really adorable and I loved it a lot.

[thirdonebetween]

aww, thank you ♥

[skoosiepants]

this is so incredibly wonderful. everything is just perfect.

[thirdonebetween]

thank you so much! ♥ i am glad you enjoyed it!