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Aug 16, 2009 17:44

69, BRO! (the walk of no shame)
all time low; alex gaskarth/jack barakat
r/nc-17; 15,160 words

this is part two. read part one first.

part two. )

all time low

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c_shads August 18 2009, 02:22:54 UTC
AHHHH!!KJWKDJHFASKLDJFAS!
I would do the quoting thing, excpt then I would just have to comment you with the whole story, it was that raddd.
Like seriously, it was sooooo fucking hilarioussss.
skdjfaskljdfklajsdf I dont even know how to sum it up.

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c_shads August 18 2009, 04:18:58 UTC
Well, why write it if its not fun, right? :]

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c_shads August 18 2009, 04:19:50 UTC
OH! I got FC! yay :]

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mitchiemarie August 18 2009, 02:44:10 UTC
dang!!!
this was a huge whopper!!!
XDDD
but really, truly, madly, deeply fun!!
=DD
you so win at life <333333
^^
and
-superscenefangirlmode?-
lyyke zomfgzzz!!!! Jal3x ish s00000 teh sm3xx!!!!!!!
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I liek t0+3s wi!!$shhh I c0ulldddd havv3 tehrr bab¡¡3$$
-endfangirl-
xDD LOL!

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mitchiemarie August 18 2009, 02:45:46 UTC
C-rap
>_<
I forgot to log in, went back and ended up posting twice.
AGAIN.
xD
I almost pwnedd fc!!!

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asphyxiatide August 18 2009, 03:57:12 UTC
i think that this may very well be one of my favorite atl fics. ever.
this was about 18 types of adorable and hot and hilarious and brilliant. especially that last bit about jack's mom's vagina. amazing. seriously, i laughed so hard my step-dad stared at me and asked me why i was having a seizure.
yeah. you win.

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thirdonebetween August 18 2009, 18:19:57 UTC
LOL, i love it when i write something that someone can comment with something like

"especially that last bit about jack's mom's vagina"

and it's totally appropriate. laughing over here, i'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)

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asphyxiatide August 19 2009, 01:57:23 UTC
hahah, me tooo, it's one of my favorite things as a writer, (:

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umhiimrawr August 18 2009, 04:06:48 UTC
I don't know what to say.
That blew my fucking mind.
Present tense always makes stories more dramatic.
I liked how it was so dark and light and drunk and sweet and confusing and subtle and everything all at once. I dunno. I sound like Jack right now. xD Probably 'cause I need to go to sleep.
BUT anyway, I loved it. The length was perfect. (I sound like Jack again, bwahaa) Sooo great. You're a fabulous author. x33
6 out of 5 stars. (:

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thirdonebetween August 18 2009, 18:22:06 UTC
thank you so much! i always write in present tense; i'm not sure when i got into the habit, but i don't even know if i'm capable of writing like a normal person anymore, haha. whoops.

sounding like jack is not a bad thing. :) glad you liked it!

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