FIC: TORN PORN: 1st Attempt [Ohkura/Ryo, R]

May 12, 2008 22:32

Title: TORN PORN: 1st Attempt
Pairing: Ohkura/Ryo
Rating: eh. R, I guess. Maybe NC-17-ish?
Disclaimer: My cage is waiting. Ahahahaha....
Notes: This is a present for alissa because she's been really having a ... well because she DESERVES IT and I wanted it to be done Friday and augh sorry. But its done! And its cause ILUSM and lasdfja well. YOU SMELL ( Read more... )

ohkura/ryo, ryo, fic, ohkura, birthday

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airairo May 13 2008, 03:50:10 UTC
I LOVE YOU LIKE NEBULA.

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this_is_cd May 13 2008, 04:00:58 UTC
OMG. LIKE NEBULA. THIS IS GOOD. I LOVE YOUUUUUU JUST THE SAME~ (that should be heard in a Bradley Nowell voice. In fact, I will try to find the song to upload for you~)

AUGH I still need to upload the SUGAR DADDY & friend icon~

Por Vous~
zomg i am speaking french to you~

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this_is_cd May 13 2008, 04:01:48 UTC
<33333

THANK YOU! I'm HOPING for a sequel. XD I keep hoping for sequels to a few of them and get distracted along the way XD Cross your fingers for me! :D

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ceathair May 13 2008, 04:09:24 UTC
That was pretty hot. Like, oven hot or hot July Californian day, but absolutely believable.

Yay, fic!!! Good fic is rare these days, so thank you!

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this_is_cd May 13 2008, 04:13:00 UTC
EEEE <333333 Thank you! So glad you liked it! I'm glad it came across in a believable way too. I'm always nervous about that since it is..well RPS XD

<333 Thank YOU!

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ceathair May 13 2008, 04:57:53 UTC
There, a better icon. I really liked your moment where Ryo is like realising that Ohkura is going to do it, it felt very real. Not like magical blowjob skills just appears out of thin air and then the sex makes no sense. It was a really hot, awesome fic.

Was there a sequel with a condom? I heard a rumour ;) is it a flavoured condom? XD

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I love that icon! I love that shoot so much! this_is_cd May 13 2008, 05:38:15 UTC
Oooh! Alissa liked that moment too and, I have to admit, I think its my favorite moment too. I try to make things real as I can because I don't like stuff that's too ~magical and perfect~. Because no. XDDD

lkdfjslj I think a sequel would work better than having had this one long ridiculous marathon of sexing fic. Because well, it doesn't seem like anything would have lasted that long in the first place since this is kinda rushed and has been building up for a while...

So hopefully there will be a sequel that I can write soon that happens like, the next night or week. XD

As for flavored...XD I don't know! LOL I was thinking something else but we shall see~ ;)

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araanaz9 May 13 2008, 04:21:10 UTC
This hot. Like. Um. Yeah. Real hot. *___*

I'm sure there was something else I wanted to say but my brain just melted. I blame the hot.

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this_is_cd May 13 2008, 04:39:14 UTC
*________*

FLAIL. I'm so glad you liked. *blows cool air on you*

<33333333

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impynymph May 13 2008, 04:21:46 UTC
KDSLFJAKLSDFKL *____*

ISO

YOU ARE AMAZING

AND I LOVE YOU!

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this_is_cd May 13 2008, 04:39:45 UTC
LKJSDFLKSJDFLKJ

:X :X :X

I LOVE YOU OMG.
*SQUISH*

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