Inept

[thisendever]

insecurity strangles the crowd
but the brave put pen to page
discretion weeding out the weak
the fall of heroes when
tides change and tint of light
fades from lime to red
restless eyes wander
question poorly answered linger
captured by innate fear
liberty without reason is
waste

Comments

question!

[blueyesfathead_]

are these poems to be read aloud or are they written to be sung?

they are good.

you are a G.

------->d

Re: question!

[thisendever]

Most of these entries are ironic metaphors that summarize my day, and they kinda just flow. Um.. *thinks* Both i guess. They can be read and I'm sure they could be sung too.
I love you Dallen,

p.s. i miss your hair. :(