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thishidden_muse

Desperation.

Apr 12, 2011 23:20

Title: Desperation.
Prompt: 15. This is my desperation in action
Rating: PG
Word count: 623
Summary: The story of how Billy got his picture of Penny

( If I had my Melt Ray with me, you wouldn't survive another minute. )

penny, prompt, doctor horrible, billy

Comments 7

luccamajere April 13 2011, 17:53:47 UTC

XD D'aww, so cute and perfectly plausible! You have Billy's voice down well in this, I think.

thishidden_muse April 13 2011, 18:54:16 UTC

*swoon* Thank you for the compliment, dear! My goal is always to stay in character as much as possible, so your comment absolutely made my day ^-^

meridian_rose April 14 2011, 10:21:40 UTC

Lovely, with great descriptions. Billy gazed down at the reason he was precariously perched in the tree. There she was, lovely as ever with her copper hair shining like her namesake. You paint such a wonderfully rich picture.

thishidden_muse April 17 2011, 22:37:49 UTC

Thank you dearest! That is a wonderful compliment to hear.

jamie55 April 17 2011, 03:47:48 UTC

>Wait. Had Penny seen the flash? O. M. G. She was looking over!

That made me laugh so hard. I actually lol (literally).
I really do like your writing style overall - you have Billy very well done. =)

thishidden_muse April 17 2011, 22:36:55 UTC

Thanks so much! :D

darkly_ironic April 26 2011, 19:32:51 UTC

Aww, I love Billy in this! So cute! : D