AMY IT WAS SO GOOD!! AND SWEET AND JUST REALLY ROMANTIC ;A; I WANT TO LEAVE A REALLY LONG COMMENT OF EVERYTHING I LOVE BUT TBH I'D JUST BE QUOTING THE WHOLE FIC.
the beginning was really great, kyungsoo being sassy and wearing sandals and falling and cHENSOO.
then jongin frick dude i loved how you wrote jongin with the waves and the surfing and the running away it was so great ;;
"But it's hard not to act shy when someone like Jongin is looking at you with smiling eyes, face brighter than the setting sun" BYE
"Kyungsoo watches as Jongin's eyes grow darker and deeper like the sea. The loneliness that tints Jongin's voice is subtle, but Kyungsoo can hear it. He wants to get rid of it, let it sink to end of the ocean and bring Jongin back up.
"But the sand's always there," Kyungsoo offers hopefully. Jongin turns to look at him, and now it's his turn to to be confused. "The sand will always greet you." TEARS FELL DOWN MY EYES THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL
"If Jongin is a wave that always comes and goes, then it'll only be a matter of time
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cries thank you T_T as long as you like it then this is good enough yus u_u sobs your comment is so beautiful /pets it. omg you were no burden at all tbh i'm sorry i took forever and kept asking questions about it tbh i just didn't want to write something you would totally not like ;; thank you again for everything <333333
omfg bless you for this amazing fic ;A; im probably not the first but yeah you're really good in writing and i love your ways for characterization!!! keep writing man you're really good at it ^^ i can't wait for your other fics
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the beginning was really great, kyungsoo being sassy and wearing sandals and falling and cHENSOO.
then jongin frick dude i loved how you wrote jongin with the waves and the surfing and the running away it was so great ;;
"But it's hard not to act shy when someone like Jongin is looking at you with smiling eyes, face brighter than the setting sun" BYE
"Kyungsoo watches as Jongin's eyes grow darker and deeper like the sea. The loneliness that tints Jongin's voice is subtle, but Kyungsoo can hear it. He wants to get rid of it, let it sink to end of the ocean and bring Jongin back up.
"But the sand's always there," Kyungsoo offers hopefully. Jongin turns to look at him, and now it's his turn to to be confused. "The sand will always greet you." TEARS FELL DOWN MY EYES THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL
"If Jongin is a wave that always comes and goes, then it'll only be a matter of time ( ... )
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sobs your comment is so beautiful /pets it.
omg you were no burden at all tbh i'm sorry i took forever and kept asking questions about it tbh i just didn't want to write something you would totally not like ;;
thank you again for everything <333333
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OMG /SCREAMS/
SPOT.
GONNA READ IT TONIGHT.
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AS EXPECTED FROM U AMY THIS IS WONDERFUL OMG <3333333
i really like how u portray jongin here ;~~~~; (somehow i can relate lol idk)
i wanna quote some things but i tend to be annoying when i spazz over OTLOTLOTL ;;
i really love this amazing masterpiece of yours pls don't stop writing ;~~~;
thank you for writing this amy~ <3333 XOXO ;D
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((/clings to u so u can't leave like jongin then u_u))
thank you for reading :'D <3
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don't worry about the tags cause they're the basically the same thing
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sobs thank you ;; <33333
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