wah~ aww so cute and sad but good ending lol baekhyun disappeared to chanyeol's XDDD but the taohun :P laksdjflakjflkjf but wah~ freakin' jongin running everywhere but finally stays for kyungsoo i felt sad about the sekai but glad it fixed itself :( but wah~ cutie little kyungsoo
btw, i noticed some mistakes idk if you wanted to fix them?
1. "Right. Well. Uh, did you want me to come by?" he asks, hating how <- missing the rest of the sentence 2. He knows he can't Jongin at bay for long, so he gives in and lets himself smile a little. <- missing a word between "can't" and "Jongin"
OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR POINTING THOSE OUT why does no one else point this out tbh i bet they noticed at least the first mistake u_u /sighs/ but seriously i really appreciate it :) thank you so much for reading!!<333333
AMYYYYYYY OH MY GOD A 14K KAISOO FIC T_T this is definitely going on my fic rec list :D i absolutely love the kaisoo in this (although when i thought jongin was going to leave my heart was hurting so much ;;) and this au! plus the suchen ♥♥ (my two otps ahh) you are so talented at writing i hope you never stop posting amazing fics!! ♡
WHAT IS COHERENCE, IS THAT EVEN A THING ? Oh.My.God /breathes First of all I practically live on the beach, like I am a staircase away from it and the sea so this just hit home run, okay ?
And trust Kyungsoo to trip over surfboards and air and everything basically, he's just so lovable and I adore the way you portrayed everyone!
I don't even ship those damned maknaes, man!(Or SeKai, or Kai x anyone other than Kyungsoo,really, but I deal) But, damn, you know when you just read a fanfic and you get so into it tht even the pairs you don't ship seem real? That's when you know shit gets deep.
Don't you even dare mentioning summer e-ending. Don't. You.DARE!
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Cries your comment is so asdfghjkl u_u <33333333 omg I have a house like a mile away from the beach i'M THERE TOO OFTEN MAN (am i right about the sand and bikers or am i right tbh u_u) thank you so much for reading :'D <33
You deserve some love after all the awesomeness that you write ! Here have some more <3333 I know , right ? You go to the beach and you're like 'Yeah, i'm gonna stay or an hour or so...' BAM 5 hours later you're still there building a sand castle or something ;D And for me it's even worse! I just go home -eat- and then come back to the beach. (them bikers, man and the sand is just.....like how does it get on my skin if i haven't even touched. wacky stuff right there) than you so much for replying <333 BTW I added you as a friend, is that okay with you :) ? (Smooth- ask after you've added said person. Really smooth -_-)
cries sorry for the late reply ;A; i'm terrible with replying, and school just started ahh T_T but omg yeah i've actually never made a sand castle tho tbh ;A; it always fails cries i hate sand LOL and of course that's okay :D
THIS... THIS WAS JUST BEAUTIFUL! !!! I woke up not feeling myself today.. so I'm lying in bed drowning myself in kaisoo fics and im glad yours was the first on my list!!!!
This whole fic is packed with emotions that I temporarily forgot mine ♡
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but good ending
lol baekhyun disappeared to chanyeol's XDDD but the taohun :P laksdjflakjflkjf
but wah~ freakin' jongin running everywhere but finally stays for kyungsoo
i felt sad about the sekai but glad it fixed itself :( but wah~ cutie little kyungsoo
btw, i noticed some mistakes idk if you wanted to fix them?
1. "Right. Well. Uh, did you want me to come by?" he asks, hating how <- missing the rest of the sentence
2. He knows he can't Jongin at bay for long, so he gives in and lets himself smile a little. <- missing a word between "can't" and "Jongin"
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why does no one else point this out tbh i bet they noticed at least the first mistake u_u /sighs/ but seriously i really appreciate it :) thank you so much for reading!!<333333
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this is definitely going on my fic rec list :D i absolutely love the kaisoo in this (although when i thought jongin was going to leave my heart was hurting so much ;;) and this au! plus the suchen ♥♥ (my two otps ahh)
you are so talented at writing i hope you never stop posting amazing fics!!
♡
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cries thank you so much T_T why are you so nice i just-- /cries in your arms
thank you <33333
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I love every part of this! Even the other pairings!!!
Thank you for sharing this! ❤❤❤❤❤
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Oh.My.God /breathes
First of all I practically live on the beach, like I am a staircase away from it and the sea so this just hit home run, okay ?
And trust Kyungsoo to trip over surfboards and air and everything basically, he's just so lovable and I adore the way you portrayed everyone!
I don't even ship those damned maknaes, man!(Or SeKai, or Kai x anyone other than Kyungsoo,really, but I deal) But, damn, you know when you just read a fanfic and you get so into it tht even the pairs you don't ship seem real? That's when you know shit gets deep.
Don't you even dare mentioning summer e-ending. Don't. You.DARE!
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omg I have a house like a mile away from the beach i'M THERE TOO OFTEN MAN
(am i right about the sand and bikers or am i right tbh u_u)
thank you so much for reading :'D <33
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I know , right ? You go to the beach and you're like 'Yeah, i'm gonna stay or an hour or so...' BAM 5 hours later you're still there building a sand castle or something ;D And for me it's even worse! I just go home -eat- and then come back to the beach.
(them bikers, man and the sand is just.....like how does it get on my skin if i haven't even touched. wacky stuff right there)
than you so much for replying <333
BTW I added you as a friend, is that okay with you :) ? (Smooth- ask after you've added said person. Really smooth -_-)
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but omg yeah i've actually never made a sand castle tho tbh ;A; it always fails cries i hate sand LOL
and of course that's okay :D
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I woke up not feeling myself today.. so I'm lying in bed drowning myself in kaisoo fics and im glad yours was the first on my list!!!!
This whole fic is packed with emotions that I temporarily forgot mine ♡
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thank you so much for reading!!<3333333
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