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a slight cause and almost celebration

Jan 24, 2007 23:52

title. a slight cause and almost celebration
rating. 14a.
pairing. Sam/Dean, blink-and-miss-it Sam/Jensen Ackles reference.
notes. “Experimental” “writing” about 1580 words long. Dean is drunk, and also Sam is drunk, and also possibly me, thanks. Happy birthday, Dean.

( a slight cause and almost celebration )

pairing: sam/dean, style: experimental, length: 1000-2000, genre: drama, fandom: supernatural, genre: comedy, rating: 14a, genre: angst, genre: schmoop

Comments 32

missyjack January 25 2007, 05:23:03 UTC

drunk!Dean and drunk!Sam are the BEST birthday present for us. Lovely story.

moveablehistory January 25 2007, 15:37:21 UTC

I was hoping it would work out, yes. And I'm glad you like it! :D

goodnight January 25 2007, 06:32:46 UTC

hehe liked it, as per usu. ;) Although, I think 14A may be too low a rating...thator I dont know my ratings haha

moveablehistory January 25 2007, 15:40:20 UTC

Whenever I see that icon, I giggle a little inside. ;)

Hmmm, I usually think I pick ratings pretty okay, hmm. Maybe I've been corrupted. :)

goodnight January 25 2007, 15:57:22 UTC

hehe that is my reaction every time I use it.

I think I just tend to think of 14A as a low rating cause it has 14 in it, but it's prolly higher than I assume it is. haha.

moveablehistory January 25 2007, 15:59:12 UTC

heee. :)

And nawww, it's cool. I just thought it didn't seem like a 'R' fic, and definitely not an 'nc-17' fic. I'm all curious about lines and such, though. I mean, when there is a certain rating on a fic, people expect things, I guess, and so therefore I lowered the rating. Hmmm! :)

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flipmontigirl January 25 2007, 06:33:17 UTC

Lovely. :)

moveablehistory January 25 2007, 15:42:14 UTC

Thank you kindly. ♥!

deirdre_c January 25 2007, 07:36:45 UTC

Sam sounded closer, like possibly six months away

Yeah, I liked the style a lot!! Fun!

moveablehistory January 25 2007, 15:42:54 UTC

I had reservations about the style - not for everybody, obvs. - but I'm so pleased you liked it. :DD

ant_power January 25 2007, 07:50:32 UTC

Oh wow. Just... wow. You've got the voice in this absolutely perfect. I mean, it could so easily have gone bad but instead it is just... wow.

I really love how you have Sam catching up to Dean in reference to time, and the contrasts between what Dean thinks and what he thinks, if that makes any sense at all. And I like how it just happened, sort of naturally with no needing to talk about it or overanalyse.

I have so much love for Dean wanting to salt the Cuervo.

Seriously, I think this the best birthday!fic I've read, and I've read a whole bunch!

moveablehistory January 25 2007, 15:56:34 UTC

Oh gosh, thank you. ;D

I think - well, the Dean in my head does - that time spent catching up is a supergood thing, and that Sam is getting closer, that they're getting closer. And yes, sort of naturally with no needing to talk about it or overanalyse. - exactly. :D

That bit makes me giggle. Heeeee, salt the cuervo. :)

Thank you kindly, that means a lot to me. :DD