any verbal account of a person

[moveablehistory]

title. any verbal account of a person
pairing. J2
rating. PG
notes. 1850wc. For belovedsnail. Huge thanks to walkawayslowly. Wherein Gisela attempts to put classical film theory class to practical use. Title from A Dialectic Approach to Film Form.
summary. Jensen is shy and always has been.
music. Sia; Breathe Me (Ulrich Schnauss Remix). [download] (k, i hope this one is

Comments

[jamesinboots]

Aww, honey, this was gorgeous. Shy Jensen is ... WOW. I want to wrap him up in my arms and SQUEEZE. Or, like I told you a little while back, study him. :D

I love Jensen's POV here - really deep and quiet at the same time.

Jensen is suddenly aware of the rough texture of the couch's fabric under his hands, the clash of colours on the ugly fabric.

Dude, that's a beautiful line. As is what came after it - the thought and sense processes here just ... work, they really do. :)

[moveablehistory]

I know! What is it about this dude that inspires wrapping-up-and-hot-chocolate kind of feelings? :D

I'm so glad you liked this piece - it was interested for me to try to write, and I'm glad it worked. :D :D :D

[walkawayslowly]

It's still beautiful! I love the style of this fic, it works really, really well.

And oh, Jensen. I love you. :D

[moveablehistory]

Thank you for your help! :D

And mmmm, ♥

[wildwordwomyn]

I like this. Has a great flow. Jensen all quiet and shy and Jared being out there and honest and both reaching out in their own ways. You played it well:)

[moveablehistory]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :D

[aeroport_art]

*happy sigh* I love the format of this, it's so unique and creates a wonderful mood--quiet, realistic, and meaningful. Thanks for writing.

[moveablehistory]

I was a little worried about the format, and so thank you for mentioning it.

Thanks!

[paraserpiente]

This is beautiful. Minimalist, practiced, and very nicely done.

[moveablehistory]

That's what I was going for, and so - thank you very much. :D