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Beside the Machinery, This

Apr 15, 2006 18:59

title: Beside the Machinery, This
rating: PG, Hard 14A if you have quite the imagination.
disclaimer: This is a derivative work and no profit is being made.
notes: Spoilers for the pilot and Bugs, but only a little. Slashy/Wincest companion piece/sequel to Deus Ex Machina. Special thanks to elle_dritch for betaing - thanks muchissimo. Suggested reading format ( Read more... )

verse: deus ex machina, genre: crack, length: -1000, rating: 14a, pairing: sam/dean, fandom: supernatural, genre: schmoop

Comments 67

impertinence April 20 2006, 10:46:16 UTC

DUDE.

This fic could have sucked. I mean, really sucked, in a fundamentally AWFUL way. But instead it's one of the best things I've read in awhile. You just--you nailed it. And I absolutely love the ending.

moveablehistory April 20 2006, 14:37:04 UTC

Heh, sweet.

I've got to admit that I read "suck" and the first thing I thought was "oh jesus no!" and then I read the rest of your comment and now I'm grinning like a FOOL. :)

Glad you like it. ♥

porntestpilot April 20 2006, 12:38:22 UTC

Time is irrelevant, really - only mileage counts.

Great line. Fantastic story. God, I love that car.

moveablehistory April 20 2006, 14:39:52 UTC

Thanks, thanks, and so do I. :)

ps., your icon makes me laugh and then question my salvation, LOL.

♥

zortified April 20 2006, 13:34:07 UTC

This was totally cool. Wonderful, and of course their car would come to life.

moveablehistory April 20 2006, 14:41:00 UTC

Hehe, yay. I'm glad you like it and you're right - of course it'll come to life. We might not see it, but I bet it totally is. :)

phantomas April 20 2006, 15:49:01 UTC

The car doesn't understand about seasons passing. It doesn't know, for example, how long it went without a sam (sammy?) part and it doesn't know how long the john part's been gone. It thinks it might remember the sound of water hitting something called 'ocean', but the car doesn't recall if that was before or after the second to last oil change, or if it ever happened at all. Time is irrelevant, really - only mileage counts.

Beautiful, beautiful passage. Metallicar philosophy, and time and the Here and Now of mechanic and parts.
Your Metallicar voice is truly unique :)

moveablehistory April 20 2006, 18:37:48 UTC

I didn't think of it as a Metallicar!philosophy, but yeah. I like. :)

Thanks. ♥

midnightbex April 20 2006, 18:53:00 UTC

This is one of the most original fics I've read in any fandom. Wonderful perspective on the dean and sam (sammy?) parts and seeing from the view of a car. Great great job.

moveablehistory April 20 2006, 22:20:22 UTC

Yes! Originality! *twirls!*

Thanks. :)