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hello, sweetheart.

Jul 31, 2006 13:42

title: hello, sweetheart.
author: moveablehistory
rating: almost porny. ehhh, hard 14a.
characters/pairings: ofc, Sam/Dean.
summary: 1190ish words of a third person observing how much Dean loves Sam. And vice-versa.
note: son-of-a-bitch is used as a generic all-purpose expletive. Just so you know. The book Eleanor Rigby is a reference to the beatles ( Read more... )

verse: made fast in truthful words, rating: 14a, pairing: sam/dean, -author's favourites-, genre: drama, fandom: supernatural

Comments 42

girlneedsagun August 1 2006, 09:28:14 UTC

Oh gosh. I LOVED this. Sweet and yearning and just...yes. Very good.

moveablehistory August 1 2006, 14:55:51 UTC

Thanks so much. ♥

andthatisthat August 1 2006, 11:41:38 UTC

This was such a cool idea - really original, such a change of pace. I absolutely loved it. It's nice to see the relationship from an outsider's perspective who doesn't know all of the baggage and the angst that comes along with it, and just sees the chemistry and the awesomeness. Thanks for sharing!

moveablehistory August 1 2006, 15:00:37 UTC

I heart outsider perspectives so much, and I love reading them. :) I like the way it plays out for her - stripped of the angst and idealized.

You're welcome. ♥

lunarwolfik August 1 2006, 11:59:57 UTC

tall-drink-of-water kind of guy.

Sam really is a tall-drink-of-water kind of guy.

with the lies at the edges of his voice

Sam's power is his voice and if he isn't careful, he can cut Dean down where it hurts.

I laid down on their sex-soaked sheets and thought about what love tasted like.

This line kills me because it shows how very *alone* this girl is and how Sam and Dean's relationship are a lifeline for her, their love for one another something to cling to, and to give her hope.

The quiet irony though out, that her view of their love being pure and wonderful when, if she knew they were actually brothers, she'd find it wrong and icky, makes me love this fic *even more*

moveablehistory August 1 2006, 14:58:37 UTC

Yeah, exactly. :)

She's an interesting kid, I think I might have to visit her again. You've pretty much nailed the way she saw Sam and Dean, and would of seen them had she known. ♥

Thanks. :D

tigriswolf August 1 2006, 15:09:25 UTC

I like the narrator. I love outside POV's about the boys.

moveablehistory August 1 2006, 20:11:44 UTC

I dig outside POV's too - thanks. :D

tabaqui August 1 2006, 15:59:13 UTC

Nice, bitter, sweet and hurty. Good, good stuff.
:)

moveablehistory August 1 2006, 20:11:27 UTC

Thanks! :D