Comments | thiswholeflight: fic: "you don't have to be fast [but you better be fearless]" (valentine) r

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fic: "you don't have to be fast [but you better be fearless]" (valentine) r

Nov 14, 2011 20:05

Title: you don't have to be fast [but you better be fearless]
Author: thiswholeflight
Rating: R
Word Count: 3,633 words
Character/Pairing: Valentine (and The Circle -- various pairings though mostly Valentine/Jocelyn)
Fandom: The Mortal Instruments
Summary: "I forgive you and one day, my love, I will make this right."
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers for the first three ( Read more... )

what: by the angel, what: why am i writing this god?, book: the mortal instruments, character: valentine morgenstern, fanfic

Comments 5

atomic_eyes November 15 2011, 13:57:28 UTC

I don't like Valentine suddenly like you said I would! But this is awesome. I'm so glad I made you read these books LA LA LA LA LA.

thiswholeflight November 15 2011, 15:10:46 UTC

I only said you might, not that you would! He still does all his crazy mad shit in this and I am not like, "Oh Valentine, I love you so completely." I mean, he kills Celine in this story and covers it up. Haha. I love how your comment makes it almost seem like you're the one that's written this.

HAIL MY AWESOME.

I mean, yeah. Sob, crazy!

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thiswholeflight November 16 2011, 00:34:32 UTC

Thank you so very much for such a lovely comment. I admit, I'm a sucker for any and all feedback. This is my first TMI fic and I didn't expect to end up writing about Valentine. It just... happened. Like you mentioned in your comment, I don't dislike or like Valentine either. Though, admittedly, writing this gave me much more empathy/sympathy for him. I really want to take things from his perspective and I truthfully feel that his actions are a blend of decent into madness and what he believes to be truth and right.

Aside from that, I'm taking a moment to bathe in such an amazing compliment and dancing a little on this end.

As for writing more, I will definitely be doing so. I've already got an idea for another story.

Thank you again!

<3 jayfeather97 December 16 2011, 10:21:33 UTC

That was just so,so great :D Harhar this has just become my headcanon ^^ PLEASE write more for the TMI fandom, it's so small and needs writers like you :D

re_nan February 9 2012, 20:48:09 UTC

Valentine is such a complicated character. The more I read about him in the books, in fanfics, the more I understand that when you believe in something there's no wrong. I would say that I could compare his action to Aristotle thoughts. Every action has as finality the well.

I really hope to read more from you, I'm just a beginner in this vast world of amateur writers, but i guess i can recognize good texts. Thanks!