projects.. Blahh

[thit]

Well just got my introduction back from Henriette - with a lot of red markings.. She just confirmed what I already knew, but it's good to have someone to tell you or spelle it out loud!! So I know this much: my language is to "normal" and not varied enough, I have to make it more acharological.. How??? And if the introduction had that many markings

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[atrice]

That was what she told me too; make it more "article" like and not just so "assignment" like... to blend the analysis and the discussion together, and be more "free" in the writing. But she liked the way I wrote, that's always something - I can take a look at what you got and suggest something? :)

[thit]

That would be nice.. But right now i'm trying to blend it all togheter - that is not easy!! really!!! But I can sent it to you tonight!! It would be really cool!!! Thanks