And now for something completely different...

[thorncoronation]

A bit of a departure. Let me know what you think.

The light was too bright, too yellow, flickering. Or that might have just been him. Given his druthers, he’d have been slipping in and out of that light right now, flat on his back on the lino, the smell of urinal cakes cloyingly sweet in his nose. And when the next visitor to this deodorised,

Comments

[ravenseer]

OOHHH.... Why haven't I seen this side of you before now???

I love it....

[thorncoronation]

Thankyou!
^_^
P.

[coyote_sun]

Whoa! WTF? Outt a left field from no where. I like it a whole lot. Remind me to post some of the other stuff I haven't let anyone see due to the fact that it's pretty graphic.

T.

[thorncoronation]

Yeah, I'm considering writing more about these two...
Writing for a guy is kind of hard, but.
I'd love to see your unshown stuff, Tim.
Glad you liked it!
P.

[alison_carson]

Love it, different and very cool. Hope you write more with these characters, Felix is cool; not sure whether to like him or not just yet, either way he's great.

[thorncoronation]

Thanks, I plan to make it a multi-part saga.
P.

[alison_carson]

Excellent, I look forward to the next installment.
I've been having writers block I swear, I keep wanting to have an Alison rant but can't think of what to say. *sigh*

Lovely

[n_overton]

You know you should think about writing *snicker* How have you been. Call me.