Exotic event

Jul 14, 2006 16:50

My girlfriend ran the Mayor's Midnight Marathon as part of a large charity group called Team in Training (TnT for short). People sign up and pledge to raise a minimum amount of money (Kelly had to raise $3,900 US) in exchange they are given free training, large weekend event runs to help get people into shape, fitness coaching and free airfare and ( Read more... )

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exotic event anonymous July 17 2006, 19:56:42 UTC
Yes. I can see how this would be super-exotic to you. Though you look quite fit, you don't have the direct motivation to participate in such as massive event, unlike your girl friend. The opening paragraph gets right to the point with a readable grabber. I cannot even imagine a spaghetti dinner rah-rah session for 2,000 participants. The Runner's World writer must have been a welcome relief after the intensity of the personal testimony. Why is Bingham called "the penguin" anyway? Because he was shaped like one as a former couch potato? I checked out his daily blog. Now a marathon would make a great cultural scene for the special language ethnomethodology exercise. And I would like to hear about the race itself, which presumably you watched. After all this build up, you kind of left me hanging ( ... )

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2nd review anonymous July 17 2006, 22:30:03 UTC
This is pretty good stuff, and the blog/web journal is working well. But you need to catch up. The projective in particular is running very late. And web picks. And soon interviews, restaurant review, classical ethnography etc. If you can post these soon and effectively, as well as the last couple of exercises, you should be comfortably A- on the portfolio.

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