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itsirtou in thorpedo_speedo

Control; Ian/Michael

Feb 07, 2005 22:50

Control

Ian/Michael. Definately NC-17. Shower!sex. Angry!Michael. 1972 words.

Michael gets tired of putting up with Ian's control issues.

My first entry up here is a bit of a prequel, but it really isn't necessary at all to read it before this. Don't let that stop you.

( Michael is so tired of the game that Ian's trying to play. )

Comments 9

ex_sodiumlig110 February 7 2005, 21:10:11 UTC

OH. MY. GOD.

Seriously, I swear to God, I've been pissed at fandom lately, but this? WAS AWESOME OMG. I actually like, SUCKED IN MY BREATH AT THE END. You said something about a prequel? Where? Have I read it? If so, why don't I remember? If not, WHY NOT? *falls over* Seriously. You. Made my day. *rereads*

itsirtou February 8 2005, 04:58:35 UTC

:D *is delighted*

Thank you muchly!

The prequel was about forever ago back when the Olympics were actually happening, because I get little spurts of inspiration and this latest one didn't come until about -- oh, what, six months after my last one? If you want, you can find the prequel here: http://www.livejournal.com/community/thorpedo_speedo/19825.html#cutid1

Glad you enjoyed it!

ex_sodiumlig110 February 8 2005, 09:48:52 UTC

BLARRRRGHHHH OMG. *FALLS OVER*

I REMEMBER NOW OMG. OMGOMGOMGOMG. THAT WAS TOTALLY LIKE, UP THERE ON MY LIST OF FAVORITE STORIES EVER. OMG.

*FALLS OVER AGAIN*

Seeeriously. You. Rock. Me. Like the real thing.

cantspell February 7 2005, 21:22:58 UTC

wow, that was excellent! You did a great job describing what was going on in michael's head and at the risk of sounding like paris hilton...'twas hot, very hot :D Nicely done!

itsirtou February 8 2005, 05:00:41 UTC

At the risk of sounding like a country hick (which I probably am), thank ya'll very much! :D

horizon_greene February 7 2005, 21:24:50 UTC

You've made me so happy. I've been desperate for a good fic all day, and you delivered nicely. I love the way you've characterized Ian and Michael...particularly Michael, actually, because angry!Michael is something I've been toying with myself recently. And the sex was fantastic - semi-forced sub!Ian is a personal favorite :)

itsirtou February 8 2005, 05:01:48 UTC

Amen to that. SO much love for the angry!Michael. Especially wet angry!Michael opposite wet semi-forced sub!Ian. :D

ilive4this_38 February 8 2005, 14:28:20 UTC

i loovee this and your first story...omg
the first line is my favorite line ever.

august_showers February 8 2005, 16:14:36 UTC

Oh. My. God. I have saved this to my hard drive, that's how good it is. I don't trust the internet to keep it safe for me *is neurotic*

Finger-shaped bruises and angry!Ian and the bodysuit and Ian's smile and just GUH!