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Fic: Glimpse of Heaven (1/?)

Mar 09, 2005 14:23

I'm so nervous...
This is my first RPS that I've ever written so I hope that y'all like it.
This is only the first part so remember that there is more to come.

Title: Glimpse of Heaven
Chapter: One
Author:: Gwen
Rating:: PG-13
Summary/Excerpt:: He could say that he honestly didn’t know how it started. There was no obvious impetus that he could ( Read more... )

Comments 3

horizon_greene March 9 2005, 14:13:49 UTC

In November, Michael had felt so helplessly close to becoming Icarus- with his incredible flight and melting wings- that he had decided to take control of his life into his own hands

I loved that line.

This is very good, and I don't just mean for a first fic. It's very good, period.

Looking forward to seeing more.

lacyforthorpey March 10 2005, 11:03:17 UTC

Welcome!!

That was beautifully written can't wait for more!

ex_sodiumlig110 March 11 2005, 22:42:28 UTC

I just got around to reading this due to being up to my elbows in my own stories, and it's very good, even for a first effort. Much better than the majority of stuff that flows through here. :) I look forward to seeing more of the story from you soon!