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Glimpse of Heaven (2/?)

Mar 15, 2005 19:47

Title: Glimpse of Heaven
Author: Gwen
Rating: PG-13
Excerpt: He had always wondered why he could never be as satisfied with himself and his performance in life as well as his swimming. In the end, he came to the conclusion that maybe this dissatisfaction that he was never rid of came from the fact that he was a perfectionist and with a very strong ( Read more... )

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ex_sodiumlig110 March 15 2005, 18:15:02 UTC

Again, I really like your writing style and I like the perspective as well. I feel like it's an interesting angle to view Michael's DUI from. Great job, keep it up, and I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

bitter_femme March 15 2005, 21:26:33 UTC

So cute; I love Ian in the role of the protector (ok, so I love him in any roll, really, but my favorites are when he's being protective and when he's being submissive in bed). I really like how you depict Michael's emotions of his DUI; most authors presume he's angry or angsty or something, and I like how you have him be really guilty, like he understands the potential consequences of his actions.

vitawash24 March 17 2005, 11:51:19 UTC

I am really liking this story - for a first fic this is amazing! Sorry to take so long to comment, I rarely visit over here. Your portrayal of both of them is very touching, but fun as well at the right moments. Looking forward to more!