Comments | thorpedo_speedo: Just a beginning...

speak_stupid in thorpedo_speedo

Just a beginning...

Jul 08, 2005 15:06

This has been bouncing around in my head for awhile. It's really rough--it hasn't been beta-ed or anything. I just wanted to get it down before I head off to vacation. I was looking for some feedback, and maybe someone could beta for me when I get around to actually writing the whole fic ( Read more... )

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32_flavorz July 8 2005, 20:16:57 UTC

I like it so far. To me, it makes a very good introduction, because now I can see you launching into a whole secret crush, let's fuck in the shower story. *or whatever you had in mind of course ;)*

btw... your disclaimer made me smile, because it did. And because he needs his blonde back like woah.

speak_stupid July 9 2005, 06:31:30 UTC

Thankees! Yeah, it'll prolly be sterotypical secret crush fic, but hey, those are fun.

Bring Back Blonde Ian! BBBI!

ferretmalfoy July 8 2005, 20:36:43 UTC

Cute. J'aime bien.

speak_stupid July 9 2005, 06:33:02 UTC

Merci beaucoup!

Would LOVE to see this turn into a longer fic... miztresslynz July 8 2005, 21:37:58 UTC

It's really good so far...I wish there was more!

Re: Would LOVE to see this turn into a longer fic... speak_stupid July 9 2005, 06:34:40 UTC

Me too. But, I do have access to a computer with wireless internet on vacation, so I do get to write on the beach. Hmm, sand, water, and Ian and Michael. Perfection! (Let's just hope there's no hurricane)

Re: Would LOVE to see this turn into a longer fic... miztresslynz July 10 2005, 05:23:37 UTC

WEee! So does this mean a possibility of a follow-up fic?

I'm sure I'm not the only one that wants it.

P.S.

LOVE the icon. Hehe...pensive Ian. And no matter how his hair looks, the boy always has nice lips...a nice face in general.

sophia_black July 9 2005, 18:29:35 UTC

Oh, I really like this. I love secret crushes. They're so much fun to play with. :) I'll definitely keep an eye out for more. :)

speak_stupid July 9 2005, 18:38:28 UTC

Thanks! I'm pumped about all the positive feedback from this. Thank you allso much. *scrambles off to write more*

lacyforthorpey July 12 2005, 20:38:56 UTC

Oh I love this!!!! It's so hot and well written!