Comments | thorsbaby: Get out of my head!

thorsbaby

Get out of my head!

Jan 09, 2009 20:43

He was a bear of a man who cast a long shadow. People of a certain age would cross the street when they saw the wide stride coming. Dogs and Children where not to be deceived however, for the deliberate motion and soft eyes told them of a gentle heart. Then they saw the noble wolf emerge from him that day as he protected the cubs with slathering ( Read more... )

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kuzu_no_ha January 10 2009, 03:39:45 UTC

I love this, I feel like I know them.

gildedacorn January 10 2009, 03:46:25 UTC

I, on the other hand, am completely clueless.

thorsbaby January 10 2009, 04:21:23 UTC

Sometimes parts of (as yet) unwritten stories get stuck in my head and I can only get them out by putting them down in writing. These are three distinct scenes in my head that just kept replaying until I dumped them here. Normally I lock the post.... missed it this time.

oh well..we shall see what people think.

magpiemss January 10 2009, 05:00:51 UTC

I love it, and would definitely keep reading. And I usually don't read writers who haven't been dead for at least 100 years.

bernina2000de January 10 2009, 13:07:12 UTC

I love it, and would definitely keep reading. And I usually don't read writers who haven't been dead for at least 100 years.

Ok while I giggle over this comment - it is SO me!

I actually enjoyed a glimpse into the mind of this author! Thank you, thorsbaby.

freya46 January 10 2009, 05:45:00 UTC

that was great. could you include me in your locked writing post?? Will I see you at Birka??

mesatchornug January 10 2009, 07:15:12 UTC

the first read to me as a eulogy. i was quite confused when the second paragraph was about someone else