Fic: In the light of the morning

[thosewerepearls]

Title: In the light of the morning
Author: thosewerepearls
Pairing: Neal/Peter
Rating: PG-13/R
Disclaimer: None, really. General spoilers for earlier episodes
Summary: A study of dynamics. Sequel to You would wish long and long to be with him 

Comments

[betweenthebliss]

ahhhh oh my god you're killing me, this set of fics is so beautiful. the repressed tension is so gorgeous, from the first word it feels strung out to the breaking point, and the way you bring them back together is just amazing.

"I don’t want you," Peter whispered and he wondered how he had ever become so cruel, but he still did not move away.
"I don’t want me either," Neal admitted, kissed him.
-- made me gasp. *_______*;;;;

brb reading the rest of your white collar fic now.......

and ps, i see you said above you don't know how to go about getting a beta, well, i would love to beta for you anytime you need one. i was an english major and worked in the writing center in college so i know my shit. XD just email me anytime you wanna take me up on it (betweenthebliss @ livejournal.com). ♥!

[firstyoufall]

i don't want me either
i just, i just...D: especially after tonight's episode! oh!
i wish they would just push each other to let it go...more neal, really, at this point.

my italics show my current frustration, fo'real.