Oh my...what a lovely, lovely, lovely treat for a damp Friday evening.
I adore each and every stanza of this piece, and especially how you've written it backwards.
There is an extraordinary delicacy and power in this piece (and in all of your writing) that makes me so sorry when it ends, but also makes me so happy and satisfied.
This was brilliant - love the way you interweave the poetry, and of course your own imagery suggests just the blend of intimacy and distance that they have here. Lovely lovely fic.
Loved the sense of delicate beauty in this, and the delicate ways their relationship moved forwards/backwards step by step but always through some expression of art.
The concept of Peter as art was lovely - both in concept and in the way you worked it into this piece of art.
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I adore each and every stanza of this piece, and especially how you've written it backwards.
There is an extraordinary delicacy and power in this piece (and in all of your writing) that makes me so sorry when it ends, but also makes me so happy and satisfied.
Elr.
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P.S. I also adore your icon.
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The concept of Peter as art was lovely - both in concept and in the way you worked it into this piece of art.
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The images of Art, the poetry, and the unraveling of the relationship... WOW.
Beautifully written.
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