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elrhiarhodan April 17 2010, 03:17:35 UTC
Oh my...what a lovely, lovely, lovely treat for a damp Friday evening.

I adore each and every stanza of this piece, and especially how you've written it backwards.

There is an extraordinary delicacy and power in this piece (and in all of your writing) that makes me so sorry when it ends, but also makes me so happy and satisfied.

Elr.

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thosewerepearls April 21 2010, 20:45:07 UTC
I'm glad I could make your Friday a little better. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you, as always.

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to queen125... amycat1959 April 17 2010, 08:11:41 UTC
Love that icon! :-)

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thosewerepearls April 21 2010, 20:45:40 UTC
Thank ya!

P.S. I also adore your icon.

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daria234 April 17 2010, 05:45:38 UTC
This was brilliant - love the way you interweave the poetry, and of course your own imagery suggests just the blend of intimacy and distance that they have here. Lovely lovely fic.

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thosewerepearls April 21 2010, 20:46:35 UTC
Thank you so much. I love having a show that deals heavily with art... well art theft.

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misura April 17 2010, 06:39:44 UTC
Loved the sense of delicate beauty in this, and the delicate ways their relationship moved forwards/backwards step by step but always through some expression of art.

The concept of Peter as art was lovely - both in concept and in the way you worked it into this piece of art.

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thosewerepearls April 21 2010, 20:47:05 UTC
Thank you! They're so fun to work with, I love playing with concepts.

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Please... More? amycat1959 April 17 2010, 08:10:04 UTC
There's a BIG problem with your writing: not enough of it, and I read it so much faster than you write! :-}

The images of Art, the poetry, and the unraveling of the relationship... WOW.

Beautifully written.

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Re: Please... More? thosewerepearls April 21 2010, 20:47:40 UTC
You're so sweet. Thank you so much.

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