[Fic] The Hardest Thing, John/Scott, Scott/OC, R

[thought_ribbons]

Author: Angela

Comments

[laeliacatt]

Oh, it's so hard to read them being with anyone else but this was very well done. There were a few grammatical bobbles, but no biggies, and understandable without a beta.

[thought_ribbons]

Thanks it's more me trying to get my head around stuff by writing than anything else. When I do that, I like picking up ready-made characters, that way just need to focous on the thoughts/feelings and not much else.

Yeah I know there are a few issues I literally wrote and posted this in 20 mins

[electrogirl09]

Oof, addressing the idea of the two of them straying like that is a tough one but I thought you did it really well and, despite my wanting to think of them as saints and only for each other, John has said before that he's 'realistic' about this kind of thing.

[thought_ribbons]

John has dropped hints about, "bumps and humps in the road" so it's why I felt ok writing this. No one's perfect (as much as we like to think they are) so IDK I used the boys as a way of expressing my feelings about stuff going on in my head mostly. I do that sometimes, using "ready made" characters and just put my feelings/thoughts/ideas into them. Saves from having to build them up and I can just focus on the other stuff.

[brachypelma99]

Whoo! Humps and bumps? Hon, that was a ski slope!!!
Well written though, and full of emotions. Loved it!

[thought_ribbons]

You think that was a Ski Slope... You should see the next one i'm writing...

[colebaltblue]

you did a great job here with the emotions of Scott. I really like how you tackled the issue of making difficult choices in relationships.