review responsethoughtreflexJanuary 3 2013, 23:55:41 UTC
\O/ Thank you so much!! I am so glad that the characters and the pace worked well! It was fun to write and I'm glad you stuck with it despite all the typos. Guh. It's a huge fic for me and I miss more typos if I don't take at least three months between writing it and not reading it at all before doing the edit ;) If I ever get nostalgic and decide to read through it again I'll try to fix it up a bit. Thanks for giving it a chance regardless :D
Loved this so much! The way you wrote Danny and Steve's friendship was so well done. Really loved how the entire team pulled together like family and got Danny home. I felt so bad for Danny when he was with Marcel, but the ending was so awesome!
This was a truly tense read. I was kept on the edge of my seat from the suspense of Danny's kidnapping, the secrecy of his ability, the hints into his past, and his team's rescue of him. I loved how close you made this team, the bromance very much in evidence. You brought the closeness of their relationship to vivid life, and I appreciate that. The slasher fangirl that I am, I loved seeing the hints there even if they never strayed into the slash-y side.
Really liked how you explored Danny's ability. How it impacted his family, his past relationships, how he relates to the world in general, and how that world sees him. I was really intrigued at how the Hawaiian culture saw someone with his abilities.
Thanks for sharing this very intriguing story. It made for a fascinating two days. :)
Thanks for the review!thoughtreflexJanuary 3 2013, 23:47:33 UTC
Thank you!!! I am so glad you enjoyed the story \o/ I love the closeness of the team, and to be honest it's pretty much the only reason I ever watch the show :) I'm not gonna lie, the story could definitely be considered a pre-slash or a gen/bromance fic depending on which way you want to read it ;)
Thanks so much for taking the time to tell me you enjoyed the story!!!
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Truly amazing job here!
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Thank you! :D
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Really liked how you explored Danny's ability. How it impacted his family, his past relationships, how he relates to the world in general, and how that world sees him. I was really intrigued at how the Hawaiian culture saw someone with his abilities.
Thanks for sharing this very intriguing story. It made for a fascinating two days. :)
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Thanks so much for taking the time to tell me you enjoyed the story!!!
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