on the winds of my fancy (the world will open its arms)

Oct 05, 2014 20:16

Title: on the wings of my fancy (the world will open its arms)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2454
Spoilers/Warning(s): some mention of sex, drug use, identity theft
Summary: The prison counselor calls it a sensory writing exercise. Jess thinks this is ridulous.
Notes: Written for the October week 1 writing contest at brigits_flame. I missed you, you ( Read more... )

original, writing contest, brigits_flame

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darlinleo October 12 2014, 00:29:04 UTC
The progression of this, the peeling away of all the layers of identity, is as lovely as your collection of descriptive words. Glad to have you back, kuhori!

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fawatson October 12 2014, 11:09:58 UTC
Such lovely imagery in this; the more I read the more I agreed with Kat: I want to know more about Jess.

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jlly_coppercorn October 13 2014, 02:04:02 UTC
I agree with the other commentors - the description is amazing and peeling back the layers of the identities was a wonderful mechanism. You have definitely left me wanting to hear more of her stories and I feel a bit sad that she got caught. Her execution may have been illegal, but she was trying to live a full life and truly experience things. Not saying it's right, just that she seems a caged bird now.
Excellent writing! And I just got pinged that your week two story was submitted. I'm really excited that you managed it despite finding the prompt so late.
A new one went up this morning, just so you know :)
#gowrite

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