"I have no idea! Do you really expect me to fix this just because I started it? I had no idea what I was getting into. All I know," I said, cupping his trembling face within my hands. "...is that I love you. And we will figure it out... we just... need some time to work on it."
*gushes* I just started grinning like crazy and squeeing at that part. lol. It was perfect.
First - thank you for allowing me to read! Second - I am a HORRIBLE "commenter" so please just disregard anything I say Third - I am so stoked to get into this story!
and so I just picked at the dry skin between my callused fingers because I'm a nervous twit like that
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"I have no idea! Do you really expect me to fix this just because I started it? I had no idea what I was getting into. All I know," I said, cupping his trembling face within my hands. "...is that I love you. And we will figure it out... we just... need some time to work on it."
*gushes* I just started grinning like crazy and squeeing at that part. lol. It was perfect.
I'm sorry I'm such a fangirl. ;)
Can't wait for more!
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I love how much you get across to your readers in such little paragraphing! Like, a few words, can literally paint a thousand pictures!!
I'd love to keep reading, if you don't mind adding me that is?
Thanks, Chazz
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And thank you!
*squeal*
I'll add you.
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Second - I am a HORRIBLE "commenter" so please just disregard anything I say
Third - I am so stoked to get into this story!
and so I just picked at the dry skin between my callused fingers because I'm a nervous twit like that
I pick constantly...it's really a problem.
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