The Return: Chapter 3/?

Oct 18, 2010 11:04

Title: The Return (3/?)
Author: Threeb_1973
Rating: PG for language. May become M in later chapters.
Character/Pairings: Sam/Tara and the denizens of Bon Temps
Summary: After an absence of over a year, Tara returns to Bon Temps with her infant daughter.
Disclaimer: True Blood is the property of Alan Ball and Charlaine Harris. I make no money from ( Read more... )

sam/tara; fan fiction, true blood, fan fiction

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gerriv October 18 2010, 16:40:27 UTC
Ohhhh! It's getting good now! Men are so clueless, I can't believe that it would never occured to Sam that Maya might be his child! Thank goodness Sookie is on Tara's case about telling Sam the truth. Please update soon!

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threeb_1973 October 19 2010, 21:10:52 UTC
Obviously math isn't Sam's strong suit :D

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fatjan22 October 20 2010, 00:29:11 UTC
LoL! It is so like Lafayette to join the dots and mind trick Tara into admitting that Sam's the father. I can see Maxine acting the way you described her, that is a small town nosey parker. I'm so enjoying this!

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yalegirl03 October 18 2010, 16:47:08 UTC
I wonder if Sam will put two and two together.

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threeb_1973 October 19 2010, 21:11:55 UTC
Hee hee. I'll have chapter four up tomorrow.

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annas_corner October 18 2010, 17:04:27 UTC
I really like were this is going.

And Sam, oh Sam. Can he be more clueless? He really can't see that Maya is his daughter. Aw, poor Sam. And he still has feelings for Tara. I really liked the scene were they're waling in the store and he is carrying little Maya around. Adorable.

I am so glad you decided to post this fanfic even though you couldn't find a beta. But I have to tell you. From what I have seen you are doing just fine without one. You are a really good writer.

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craving_vintage October 19 2010, 03:07:17 UTC
I am so glad you decided to post this fanfic even though you couldn't find a beta. But I have to tell you. From what I have seen you are doing just fine without one. You are a really good writer.

I agree! :)

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threeb_1973 October 19 2010, 21:12:43 UTC
Thanks to both of you for the kind words :D

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fatjan22 October 18 2010, 17:15:34 UTC
I can't wait for chapter 4. I loved the way you developed the stories. I loved how you made Tara and Sookie buck up Sam at Walmart. It tickled me pink when he played with Maya. So sweet! More please! :_)

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threeb_1973 October 19 2010, 21:13:22 UTC
Plenty more in store for these two!

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craving_vintage October 19 2010, 03:09:23 UTC
Get a clue, Sam! I love it! That's how men are. lol And Maya knows Sam is her father, since she was so comfortable in his arms and fell asleep in his arms. :)

I can't wait till he finds out.

This is so good.

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threeb_1973 October 19 2010, 21:13:55 UTC
Yep, babies have sixth sense about these things :D

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