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threeb_1973

The Return: Chapter 7/?

Oct 27, 2010 20:15

Title: The Return (7/?)
Author: Threeb_1973
Rating: PG for language. May become M in later chapters.
Character/Pairings: Sam/Tara and the denizens of Bon Temps
Summary: After an absence of over a year, Tara returns to Bon Temps with her infant daughter.
Disclaimer: True Blood is the property of Alan Ball and Charlaine Harris. I make no money from ( Read more... )

sam/tara; fan fiction, true blood, fan fiction

Comments 13

gerriv October 28 2010, 01:54:06 UTC

Oh my Goodness! That was a WONDERFUL chapter! So sweet with Sam and Tara trying so hard not to fight. The way it was written, I could see the characters in my head like I was watching the show on tv. Great job!

threeb_1973 October 28 2010, 17:57:51 UTC

These are two EXTREMELY stubborn people here, and they are not communicating :-) Thanks for the review, more to come soon.

gerriv October 28 2010, 01:57:37 UTC

Thanks for the nice LONG chapter too!

threeb_1973 October 28 2010, 17:56:43 UTC

:-)

craving_vintage October 28 2010, 03:30:51 UTC

Great chapter!

Sam singing to Maya. Never expected and I loved it! :)

Sam and Tara at Maya's doctors appointment together and baby shopping afterwards. I know Sam will have a lot of questions. He seemed so nervous when he saw all the stuff in Maya's bedroom. He's going to be a great father.

Thanks for posting the Billy Joel video.

threeb_1973 October 28 2010, 17:58:33 UTC

Sam is determined to be a good father. More to come soon.

annas_corner October 28 2010, 17:45:13 UTC

This was adorable!

Sam is so wonderful with Maya. He will be an amazing father to her. And I hope that Sam let Tara know that he wants her, and not still pining away for Sookie.

threeb_1973 October 28 2010, 17:59:29 UTC

Sam and Tara aren't communicating the way they should; that's part of the problem. More to come soon :-)

fatjan22 October 28 2010, 22:20:25 UTC

This chapter was really good as were previous chapters. The stuff toy Sam brought was a brown dog... figures. lol! Him singing Maya a lullaby was a really nice touch. Did Tara see him doing that?

As for them discussing how often Sam should see her, I felt so sorry for him. I nearly cried! He really loves his little daughter and is determined to make everything all right. . Poor Sam, he means well, but, he needs someone to sit him down and say, hey, you need to show Tara that you want to be with her for 'her' and not because there is a child involved. These two, Sam & Tara are being so reluctant to open up to one another because they are so focused on Maya is painfully good to read.

More please! :)

threeb_1973 October 30 2010, 00:36:53 UTC

Poor Sam, he means well, but, he needs someone to sit him down and say, hey, you need to show Tara that you want to be with her for 'her' and not because there is a child involved.

That's part of the problem with these two: they aren't communicating. I just watched Season 1 again, and this is just one of several issues they need to address.

More to come soon :-)