Comments | threedee: André's will be done (sort of)

threedee

André's will be done (sort of)

Dec 11, 2006 14:54

Homes I've HadShower away the hours. Practise, patience, power. A stretch, and a leap in the night-the powers might only be waking. The day starts, and though the rhythm is sweet & the sentences neat, the beat lies at home and the home borrows & borrows & burrows, and waits until there’s no one around, until the time to strike, without sound. ( Read more... )

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threedee December 11 2006, 19:57:23 UTC

Sorry André, no grains of sand or archkings. :)

anonymous December 12 2006, 05:56:56 UTC

ooooh winny's writing prowess :D

threedee December 12 2006, 17:58:41 UTC

Hehe thanks yenny :)

atomicduck December 13 2006, 05:09:12 UTC

o_glorianna December 12 2006, 15:37:45 UTC

We hear too seldom from you. That said, I really liked the rhythm and rhyme in this piece, though I confess I don't entirely understand the impulse(s) behind its writing.

It's cold outside. Hope you're warm and rested.

threedee December 12 2006, 18:02:17 UTC

Heh, that is also the feedback I got pretty unanimously from my creative writing workshop class... after that I revised it somewhat to try and make it more concrete and less purely philosophical. I have heard many interesting interpretations of it. I will say that the impulses, as you say, were very plural indeed :)

Thanks for the comments and well-wishes.

o_glorianna December 13 2006, 04:23:50 UTC

Thinking of perhaps...changing things a little, too, in the future? XD.

Interpretations, eh? Mayhap I'll come up with my own too, after the exam-induced craziness period is over. Yes, that sentence was wrong in so many ways, but I excuse myself.

Post more, the multi-headed friend-monster demands!

threedee December 13 2006, 08:09:59 UTC

It will probably change some more, yes... might want to make it more "accessible" for my final portfolio. :) This might be the tough thing about taking creative writing and philosophy... they bleed into each other.

atomicduck December 13 2006, 05:12:25 UTC

Very lovely language (as per usual), though I don't really get it. I'll have to re-read it. I seem to get too many fragmented interpretations out of it. But it's cool, you know. High replay value... like any Joss Whedon series!

threedee December 13 2006, 08:08:34 UTC

High replay value... like any Joss Whedon series!

Highest praise ever! :D

And I saw that it was good kelm December 15 2006, 16:45:01 UTC

Go internal rhyme. I am going to steal from that piece...and there's nothing you can do about it.

Very nice.

Re: And I saw that it was good threedee December 15 2006, 17:15:39 UTC

Woot woot!

Re: And I saw that it was good kelm December 15 2006, 20:46:02 UTC

You don't quote regulations to an Archking.