[fic] you got wires coming out of your skin

[throughworlds]

title: you got wires
characters: John Callahan, Lena Austen, mentions of Sonny.
summary: Rizzy wanted backstory for some of the Original Characters we play at beyondtherift. She wanted a peak as to how they spent last year's Christmas. And she wanted horrible. I fused it all together. :|
warning: Rated R. Violence, abuse, triggery stuff, SERIOUSLY, IT'S

Comments

INCOHERENT REVIEW FIRST, k?

[varymydays]

rjkel;ajrkelajr;ejaklrje;al

[throughworlds]

XDDD I LOVE YOUR COHERENT AND INCOHERENT REVIEWS. I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT AND YOU ARE VERY WELCOMEEEEEE. <3333333333

WAUGH, Sonnyyyyyyyyyyyy 8(

I'm really glad that it all tied up together nicely because it was uncomfortable, to a point, to write it since I got down to the grit in the scenes BUT I LOVED WRITING IT FOR YOU SO YES. ;__;

a;slkdfa XDD <3333

[varymydays]

Ffff I love your use of big font, and I'm so glad that you like my reviews as they're a bit ridiculous like I am a bit ridiculous. >>

Sonny loves his people. And he gets scary around ppl who've fucked with them. I need to fic out his little meeting with Ric about the blackmail that he has cause seriously. ;;

Fff I am so sorry it got uncomfortable for you, but you did fantastically and thank you for writing it. ;;

I keyboardsmash back at youuuu :x

Coherency managed here. :x

[varymydays]

I love the juxtaposition (is that the right word?) of John and Lena during this time. I think it's amazing, because they hadn't even met so it's like they're on two different planes of thinking and would never think of each other, but they are connected by these people at the bar. I always love small mentions of the other characters being around/doing things like with other characters or just their names mentioned. Like when their mother's name was forced out of John's lips or the fact that Tim was communicating with Lena on the walkie.

I also loved that you started her out at the mission, which she had absolutely no idea would contain Ric's name in it or that he would find out about it and then... go all Rictastic at her about it, which ends up ruining their Christmas. Agh and then meanwhile John is in the basement jrkel;a GRAH being tortured by his ward who is forcing shit from him despite everything John had gone through to keep people safe. I love how much he fought anyway, fought through everything to not give away Sonny's real

[throughworlds]

IT'S THE RIGHT WORD, YES. I... BELIEVE. I'M NOT GRAMMAR'S BEST FRIEND. I'm just really glad this all worked out because I LITERALLY came up with the idea around six and all I knew was I wanted the scenes to end up intentionally choppy

[varymydays]

Lmfao if we both think its the right word, I say that it is. :x It worked out so so well, and don't you love that ideas come at the most random time sometimes? But it is perfect seriously. You are so talented at writing

[likewinning]

ELLA, THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING. I love how beautifully you managed to write this even though there are terrible, terrible things happening. I love the contrast, like Rizzy said - the abrupt switches between Lena's and John's POVs made this SO FUCKING INTENSE to read the whole way through. I loooove all the history here and the imagery, oh man. You know how sometimes you read things and you can just see everything perfectly in your head? This was one of those times.

And I love the closing lines so much because it's just... so brilliant and fucked up. Like, even though John's ward is gone now, even if Lena physically gets away from Rick, they're still always going to be there.

fkdjsks, yeah. YOU ARE KIND OF PERFECT, OKAY.

[throughworlds]

;aslkdf;alskdfa /FLAILS THANK YOU. I THINK YOU NOW SEE WHY I'D LOVE YOUR CHRISTMAS PRESENT SO MUCH. :x

I'm just as;lkfa so glad that came through because I wasn't... sure if it would, and I got uncomfortable writing it to a point, just because it was something I really COULD see in my head but dealing with the themes gratuitously to a point always makes me squirm. I had to purge it from my system or something. :x

AAAH THANK YOU FOR READING AND REVIEWING THIS HORRIBLE CHRISTMAS STORY ;__;

NO U ARE PERFECT. And now you know why John and Anya's CR makes me so fucking happy. I want to throw both my kids at yours since they aren't leaving me any time soon. :>>>

[likewinning]

YOU ARE WELCOME. LMFAO, I DO SEE THAT. :x

I know what you meeeeean. I loved writing yours but pretty much the whole way through I was like jshdfjdakadfd. true story. :>

OF COURSE, I LOVE READING ALL THINGS ELLA EVEN WHEN THEY ARE SCARY. ;___; <3

:D I dooooooo. John definitely deserves some ridiculousness in his life after all this, I mean really. :>>> THAT IS GOOD BECAUSE I WANT ALL YOUR KIDS ALWAYS. :X

[throughworlds]

I ALSO LOVE HOW I SAY 'DON'T READ' AND YOU GUYS READ. LMFAO, YOU GUYS. ilu all. /cozy hug

omg but your fic was more amazing than words can say and i had to go back and read it again today TRUE STORY

I JUST TOOK THE MOST RANDOM NAP. @_@ /random also

[iluvroadrunner6]

Elllllllllllllllla.

Dude. I don't even. I have no words. This made me, and a couple people in my head really really sad, but it was so amazing all at the same time.

I love it. I love it so much.

[throughworlds]

EMILYYY, I REALLY I LOVE THE PEOPLE IN YOUR HEAD SO I'M SORRY FOR MAKING THEM SAD. 8(

*SNUGS TIGHT*

ffff I'm so happy you did, despite that. :D

/PMs you :x