Under My Skin (100 SuJu Challenge)

[thundersquall]

Theme #95: Drowning
Title: Under My Skin
Pairing: (Writer's Choice) Yesung/Ryeowook
Author: thundersquall
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 3,948
Summary: AU. Popular singer Kim Ryeowook is kidnapped by an obsessed fan and develops a twisted relationship with him over time.
WARNINGS: Implied rape, dubious consent. Dark!fic.

A/N: Based on a psychological response known as

Comments

[giinnnzz]

MWAAAAAAA~~~~~ LoVE THIS SO MUCH!!!
I love the way yesung make wookie for himself ^^
mwahahah~~ *hugs* long time not read ur fic ^^
and I love this one coz the smut wasn't that hard~~
pheeww.. restricting myself from hard smut ^^
but love this yewook~~ moree~~ X3

[thundersquall]

Wookie belongs to Yesung, most definitely. =p

I'm also trying to restrict myself from hard smut! Been writing too much smut lately... DDD:

But anyway, thank you so much for reading! =DDDD

[giinnnzz]

mwahahahhaah~~ well, their love not only depend on hard smut ^^ *hugs*
keep working a good job!! I'll always cheering for your yewook!!! XD

[thundersquall]

Totally agreed! =DDD

Thank you dear, you're always very sweet. *hugs*

[chibi_roses]

SPOTTING

Halfway through this but going to go out and buy little fishies for our fish tank.

[chibi_roses]

I've always found Stockholm Syndrome fascinating to think about, AND YOU WROTE IT IN A FIC. A YEWOOK FIC NONETHELESS AND IT WAS SO WELL WRITTEN AND AASFHJKDHF WHY ARE YOU SO AWESOME? ILY FOR IT <3

You write the transition so well, you can feel Ryeowook's fear of Yesung in the first part, then he kind of gives up, well it seems that way to me, not sure if it's meant to be like that, then he starts to think of Yesung positively but is worried about it, and then just doesn't question it. And then he doesn't leave Yesung at the end. Normally I would be like GET OUT OF THERE, but Yewook does funny things to me, so I was happy he didn't go.

I loved the detail of them playing chess. Not sure why, but I did.

Also it kind of amuses me, because, as we've mentioned many times, in photos Yesung's like I WANT YOU and Ryeowook's like *ignore*. I wanted to mention it, didn't know what I wanted to say about it, but felt I should say something nonetheless.

[thundersquall]

adsfgaks Fishies! DONGHAE!!!

Uh, I mean. *facepalms self at being such a fangirl and associating everything with Super Junior* I used to rear fish too. =p

I've always been fascinated by Stockholm Syndrome too! This fic started out with just a rape scene and I decided to expand it, but I didn't know what context I could write rape in, but Stockholm Syndrome just floated into my mind after I thought on it for a day and I went with it. And before you ask, NO, I most certainly do not condone rape, I think it's a heinous, brutal crime, and all rapists should be castrated and then shot, but YeWook does such funny things to me too, Ali. Especially when it ends up being consensual after all. *clings to you, sobs at my own twisted mind*

Awww, we've established Ryeowook's just pretending to ignore Yesung. One obvious, unsubtle person in the relationship is quite enough without Ryeowook adding on to it. =p

Love you bb for reading. *huggles* *gives you YeWook hearts*

[chibi_roses]

Oddly enough, I normally do that but didn't this time, even though it was so obvious. Oh dear.

I didn't even think you would condone rape, don't worry. Yewook just do these things, they must be aware of it. *clings back*

Lol, he's obvious and unsubtle enough for ...several obvious and unsubtle things (just woke up, cannot find witty things to say). But we love him that way. As does Ryeowook

:) Of course I'd read it. *steals hearts*

[darleenk]

Okay, OMFG, I loved this insane amounts! I think this is like, one of my favourite fics of yours EVER. I'm memming it like woah, so I can re-read it any time I want.

It was just so slow and like, not sudden and unrealistic, I could really see the transition between being scared and feeling loved and then loving back and just sdajklsd -incoherency-

I'd quote... But I'd quote like, everything, and you know what I loved on MSN, so I hope you don't mind.

Okay, I'm going to quote. Just a little.

It’s irrational, but Ryeowook can’t help but feel a surge of gratitude towards Yesung for taking care of him.

I just LOVE this line. Like, how Ryeowook is just starting to be conditioned. Urgh, IT PUSHES A BUTTON. A FUCKED UP BUTTON, BUT A BUTTON NONETHELESS.

And now, obligatory sex quote!

"I do, I do," Ryeowook sobs, arching into Yesung as the other man hooks his arms firmer around Ryeowook's, bringing one leg around Ryeowook's thigh and spreading his legs further apart. "I like it, just don't stop, oh Yesung, please don't stop..."Yeah, I

[thundersquall]

Awww sweetheart, you know how worried I was over this? Dark!fic is most certainly not one of my specialties (it's yours, I think =p ) but you always, always give me so much love I don't even know what to do with it. *cwtches*

YeWook pushes all our fucked up buttons. *sobs for my lost innocence*

And stop jizzing, we just keep having orgasms all over each other's stuff, now I'm all weak-kneed and boneless. DDDD:

Why are YeWook so sweet and adorable and married and loving and yet so fucking kinky and hot and sexual? The conundrum, it DEFEATS me. DDD:

[sarah_nghae]

that was...oh my god

i loved the ending! :D Ryeowook was sooo sweet!

and Yesung was kind of...creepy. ( But is'nt he always? XD NO offense)

MOre power to u!!

Fighting!

[thundersquall]

Yesung's creepy but adorable and gorgeous and so hot, GAH. *loves on him*

And thank you so much for reading! *loves on you too*

[thundersquall]

I WRITE FAST BECAUSE
I HAVE LIKE NO LIFE
AND TOO MUCH TIME
AT WORK

AND KELLEY
I LOVE YOU FOR READING AND LIKING THIS
AND I HOPE IT
INSPIRED YOU FOR MORE
GREAT YEWOOK
AND OMG
WHY ARE YOU SO FREAKING CUTE
AND ADORABLE
I WANT KISS KISS KISS! (FROM YOU!)

*glomps you forever because I'm LOL-ing at your hyperness and adorableness*