you're lying, but i'm falling (i always do)

Oct 25, 2009 22:48

Title: you're lying, but i'm falling (i always do)
Pairing: Kibum/Ryeowook (broken), Yesung/Ryeowook
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 2,009
Summary: Ryeowook mindfucks Yesung by playing both him and Kibum. Despite the pairings stated, this is purely YeWook PWP, with broken!KiWook as the background.

A/N: Written rather long ago, but I never posted this, and ( Read more... )

!fanfiction, pairing: ryeowook/kibum, pairing: yesung/ryeowook

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teexsaurus October 25 2009, 16:00:34 UTC
0.0 ICE PLEASE.

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teexsaurus October 25 2009, 16:02:54 UTC
lol, i'm not gonna lie and say that i wasn't hoping for KiWook sex before YeWook sex... But I know it won't materialize, since it'd kill you to write bottom!wook with anyone else other than Yesung.

I SHOULD BE SLEEPING.

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thundersquall October 25 2009, 16:08:26 UTC
Tbh, I could write KiWook sex. I meant it when I said KiWook is the only other Wook pairing I can handle.

... And yes, I do think I CAN write bottom!Wook with Kibum. Though I would much prefer top!Wook, of course.

(The ending was rushed out in 15 minutes and is cheesy as fuck.)

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teexsaurus October 25 2009, 16:35:40 UTC
KiWook 8D Hmm. Kibum is a sex god. Forreals.

I giggled at the ending. :>

But I like cheesy, because I'm hopeless like that.

OHMYGOD, WHY AM I STILL AWAKE.

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loveisonthemenu October 25 2009, 16:05:38 UTC
spot for incoherent comment to put here later.

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thundersquall October 25 2009, 16:47:36 UTC
Amy, crying, I'm like editing this over and over, oh god, I actually hate it. Why did I post this so fast? Oh that's right, because you had to run. ;___;

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loveisonthemenu October 25 2009, 20:23:27 UTC
sheena why do you hate this so much? it's so filthy and it's a great amount of filth.

and omg, it is not cheesy and i have the reason why. cheesy, to me, is like roses on a bed and strawberries dipped in chocolate. that is mucho cheesy. you are not cheesy at all. more kinky than cheesy.

you still managed to make the ending sound all fierce and sexy. sheena, i needed yewook porn so bad and you gave it to me. don't feel bad about this! this was a great fake birthday gift.

wook demanding was so hot, but it turning into begging was hotter.

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loveisonthemenu October 25 2009, 20:24:08 UTC
/sprays you with a hose

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ficcy October 25 2009, 16:22:37 UTC
...brb dying from the hot.
Woman, write more rough YehWook sex.
AND ALSO, THANK YOU, THIS WILL KEEP ME AWAKE FOR STUDYING FOR AT LEAST FIVE MORE HOURS. :D~

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thundersquall October 25 2009, 16:31:22 UTC
skdjfks Goddammit, I can't stop editing this. I'm not happy with it at all. I wouldn't have posted it if loveisonthemenu hadn't made me do it. The more I read it the more I cringe, WHY.

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ficcy_irl October 25 2009, 16:56:12 UTC
LOL! Calm down, BB. It's good, I swear. XD

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thundersquall October 25 2009, 16:58:20 UTC
You say that 'cause you're my friend. ;___; I'm frantic over this, I swear to you. I rushed it out so fast. It was a mistake.

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fishydotlove October 25 2009, 16:49:40 UTC
O.o O.o
omg!! okay i'll admit honestly that yewook is not my otp, but this HOT!!!
well, evrything u write is HAWT n SmeXYXDD lol
bitchy wookie + angry sungie = >///<

*dies*

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thundersquall October 26 2009, 02:43:33 UTC
I'm even more glad that you liked this, especially since YeWook isn't your OTP! 8D

Thank you so much, I'm happy you enjoyed this. And don't die! *shakes, revives*

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komoyochan October 25 2009, 17:26:42 UTC
*dies from hot*

Goodness, rough Yewook sex is amazing <333 Poor Yesung for getting mindfucked though xDD!!

And I have to say I quite like the end :3 SO STOP FRETTING, YAH?! 8D You write beautifully <3333

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thundersquall October 26 2009, 03:31:17 UTC
LOL I uh... changed the ending. I feel better about it now. xD

I keep writing rough sex for them, I should really start writing sweet fluffy things! Because YeWook can also be sweet and loving and fluffy, y/y?

Thank you for liking this! <3333

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komoyochan October 26 2009, 04:26:54 UTC
Ohhh! Lol ok I was confused cause I was thinking that the ending was really good lol

And oh yes please to the sweet fluffy stuff! It should have lots of fail Yesung in it too <3333

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