Playing Safe

Jan 27, 2010 02:16

Title: Playing Safe
Pairing: Yesung/Ryeowook
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 4,009
Summary: Ryeowook is one of Korea’s biggest singing stars. Jongwoon is his bodyguard. Inspired by this picture.

A/N: Birthday fic for my favourite magnae, shiryu_yugure! Happy birthday sweets, I love you! Happy early birthday too to specialrainbow, the two of you are people who are very, very ( Read more... )

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kayevelyn January 26 2010, 21:37:10 UTC
You wrote it! But wait is this the one where Yesung is all "AHDSJKAHSD I'M STRAIGHT >:(" and Wook is all "Who cares, I'm hot fuck me" I know ideas can shift so.... but you know what it doesn't matter. This was cute and I liked it! I liked the ending too so SHUSH about your endings (or at least this one) Loved it bb~ ♥♥♥♥♥

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thundersquall January 27 2010, 09:22:12 UTC
... WELL IT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE, AND THEN... UH... SOMEHOW IT CHANGED TO FLUFF. SOBBING, IDEK, OKAY *CLINGS TO YOU* I seem to have lost the porn mojo. =/ I don't need it anymore though, because I HAVE YOU! ;DDDD

sdjkfgdjsgf I hated this ending too, I thought it was cheesy and abrupt. DDD: Ilusm Kate, you are always such a sweetheart. ♥

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happytgt January 26 2010, 22:39:45 UTC
I'm going to school soon but i'll read this in school yay fic \o/

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thundersquall January 27 2010, 09:23:09 UTC
*smacks* No reading fic in school! ;D

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happytgt January 27 2010, 09:55:23 UTC
Lol I totally fail at reading longfic in class, I got through half before my teacher came and I panicked. :|

First, ♥ ♥ ♥

I was holding my smile back at ryeowook being all puppy like and being like a perfectionist with his music, love how you added he was all touchy about 'losing his composing momentum'. The part when Yesung was like going all out to protect Ryeowook in the Beijing airport was so sweet and endearing i've never paid attention to their bodyguards before! I'm totally falling for Yesung as a bodyguard :D

Towards the end was all sweet and gentle and soft like cotton candy, why do you write so perfect youuu -hugs-

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thundersquall January 27 2010, 13:29:51 UTC
*dies* Omg, you kids, reading slash fics in school...

But awwww, thank you for your comment, you are lovely ♥ Yesung as a bodyguard is perfect and hot and GUH, yes? ;D The pic that I linked, the one which inspired this fic, he just looks so protective and loving and Ryeowook is just totally melting into him and I'm just all sjkhgdhjfgsfjd over them. ;DDD

And I was totally aiming for sweet and gentle and soft like cotton candy, but I think it kind of came out like cheesy and corny instead. =/ Ilu though, for being so sweet! Thank you ♥

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ddangkkoma January 26 2010, 22:41:46 UTC
awww kangin beign there was extra sweet on me. he loves his dongsaengs so much and it's perfect to think of him as a guard. and then he just entrusts wookie into yesung's hands, awww my mind was more into the symbolism than anything else. lol tard

but gosh when did you start thinking this one up babe? you've been keeping it a secret XD

wook was a bit forward too. i know you love slutty wook so i'm glad you put him in there too, you can't not write a yewook and not have wook being just the smallest bit skanky for yesung. this was badass overall my love. and gosh the scene with the fangirls in china, that was horrible ;-;. PLS TO JUST BE CARRYING HIM BRIDAL STYLE NEXT TIME JONGWOON

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thundersquall January 27 2010, 09:26:48 UTC
LMAO, I always love your comments. ♥ THAT WAS WHY I PICKED KANGIN! \O/// You got it, hyuuung *nuzzles you*

Well considering that I only thought about it and started writing it yesterday, I didn't exactly have a chance to tell you about it. xD It's for my magnae's birthday~

SLUTTY!WOOK FTW, DAMMIT. Of course he's throwing himself at Yesung all the time, Ryeowook practically asks for it.

I AM SO HAPPY YOU LIKED THIS, YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW *CLINGS* I THOUGHT MY PACING WAS REALLY FAIL. =/ ILU~ ♥

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coming back later oh_hesitate January 26 2010, 22:45:13 UTC
/WAILING, WHY DO YOU POST STUFF WHEN I HAVE MIDTERMS.

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oh_hesitate January 27 2010, 06:41:20 UTC
long comment is long because I'm reading during english class and I don't want to listen rofl. please have concise flailing + some concrit courtesy of me + Marion :D

1. spoilt singing star - oh I did not know I had a kink for this, hohoho, what the hell Sheena, what are you doing to me. : |
2. I DISAPPROVE OF THIS WHOLE MISTRESS BUSINESS IN THE BEGINNING. You really do love whoring Yesung around ) ;
3. hips swaying gracefully with a fluidity born of hours of dance practice - THANK YOU FOR MAKING ME GRIN LIKE A PERVERT, NOW MARION'S LOOKING AT ME WEIRDLY
4. his tiny defenceless little self will get swallowed like a baby seal in a pool of sharks TRUE, THAT.
5. I LOVE THE CONTRAST IN THE FIRST TWO SENTENCES OF THE THIRD PARAGRAPH HAHAHA OMG.
6. Marion: HE'S USING HIM, HE KNOWS HOW TO USE HIM.
Damn right Ryeowook does. : d bamf knows how to get his way.
7. If anyone knew that he made Ryeowook cry, he’d probably be ripped limb from limb. ALLOW MARION + ME TO GO D'AAWWWWW AT THIS.
8. he can be cute, especially when he smiles = NO, THE ( ... )

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thundersquall January 27 2010, 09:32:41 UTC
... WELL FUCK BUT I LOVE YOUR COMMENT. &hearts. I SHALL REPLY TO YOU CAREFULLY IN POINT FORM TOO, TO GIVE THIS COMMENT THE LOVE AND ATTENTION IT DESERVES.

1. You have a kink for EVERYTHING. =/
2. NOTHING WRONG WITH WHORING THE HOT THAT IS YESUNG. Dude, the thought of him with a woman is hot.
3. WE CAN GRIN LIKE PERVERTS TOGETHER OVER THOSE HIPS AND ASS AND LEGS \O///
4. YEAH. ESPECIALLY IF I'M THERE.
5. HE LOVES RYEOWOOK THOUGH DDD:
6. Unf yes Ryeowook knows how to use his God-given gifts. On Yesung. UNF.
7. YAY! <333333
8. I THINK HE'S CUTE EITHER WAY, I LOVE HIM ALL THE SAME. BUT YOU HAVE TO REALISE THAT YESUNG WOULD OBVIOUSLY PREFER IT WHEN RYEOWOOK'S SMILING AND HAPPY. ;D
9. Awww, dammit. I knew I would fail somehow. *takes notes* Yay for crit, though!
10. WHAT, I HAVE LOST THE PORN MOJO, GO WRITE IT FOR YOURSELF (AND ME).

THANK YOU AND ILU ♥ ;DDDDD

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thundersquall January 27 2010, 09:35:55 UTC
I CRAVE YEWOOK ALL THE TIME. D:

PROPOSAL? *BLUSHES* REMEMBER THE 72-CARAT PINK DIAMOND, HONEY!

ROFL, thank you so much *hugs* <33333

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