Fic!

May 28, 2010 21:21

Title: Roped
Author: thursdaywench 
Rating/Warnings: Nsee-17, bondage, pain, rape fantasy, mindfuck.
Pairing: Matt/Zack
Dedication: fragile_lev , who has an amazing story going, and i'm totally past due on your fic, babe. but hopefully it'll be worth it!
Author's Note: to be utterly TMI, this is based off true events. don't EVER use clothesline for rope, as it made my thumb ( Read more... )

fiction, roped, matt/zack, fanfiction

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zilldk May 30 2010, 00:17:19 UTC
Soooooooo hot! Oh, so deliciously alluring to give into dark!Matt. He's just... Mrawr! I can sooo relate to Zacky's blend of emotions - the attraction and the fear, the lust and the apprehension because imagining Mr. Shadows completely unleashed like that stirs something so primal and very carnal inside and it makes me squirm in delight! *purrs*

And serously, I think it's the first fic I've ever read where the sex didn't go as "planned". I'm... impressed! I mean, it is SO hard, once you've got the writing going, once you're in to it, to stick to the plan and break it off instead of giving in to the temptation of just letting them get it on. Am I making any sense at all? :D

That Zack actually used the safeword was a fantastic detail, and I love how Matt was still so much in control that he completely broke it off immediately (like he should btw!). He totally deserved the faith and trust Zacky had in him that made Zacky give in and let Matt live out his fantasy - even though it didn't go completely as planned. This time... ;)

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thursdaywench May 31 2010, 01:15:32 UTC
wow epic awesome comment! :D
to be completely true, that fantastic blend of carnal beast, and utterly devoted/loyal puppy dog, is what makes Matt so fucking awesome.

as for the the safeword/sex not as planned part, you can thank fragile_lev, who gave me the prompt (so fantastic!). sometimes things not going as they should can be the most beautiful thing in the world.

and yes, you make sense lol

thank you for reading, and for leaving such an excellent comment!

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punkangel2254 June 2 2010, 03:57:05 UTC
I have to say that was pretty amazing. poor Zacky and the damn lube haha. this is my favorite pairing

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niwyiben June 16 2010, 22:01:19 UTC
okay so again.../I hate it so much when something goes wrong and the comment doesn´t get posted argh/

oh god, allergic to new lube, I nearly pissed myself from laughing so hard...though it wasn´t that funny really, poor Zacky :)

I also love guilty feeling Matt very much :D

gayforward? just totally got me there :D nearly fell off of the bed at this point, seems to happen quite often to me while reading :D I should get a new bed, a bigger one :D and I just cleaned my screen toady!xD I may as well do it again, cause that line caused little dropletts of juice landing on it :D /mental note to myself: don´t eat nor drink during reading :D proven unwise too many times already :D/

yeah rape fantasies are the bes ^^ hot :) I so totally loved this!

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blueyedpauley August 7 2010, 11:46:45 UTC
Our safeword IS safeword.

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