[FIC] You and Me - Chapter VII

[thylaslain]

You and Me
Overall rating: R - NC-17

Summary: Uchiha Sasuke has returned to Konohagakure. He's changed of course. But so has everything else...
Chapter 7/?
SPOILERS: Up to current in Anime (i.e. Episode 135).
Pairing: Uchiha Sasuke x Uzumaki Naruto :: Others may be mentioned
Chapter Rating: PG-12
Disclaimer: Naruto and all related

Comments

[hypercrazyvicki]

*Sniffle* That was so sad. It's all angsty and depressing. Ohhhhhh the pain and the woe and the failure. :( Simply beautiful.

Yet there's something, this something that urges me to continue reading. It's the hope that they'll get together and try to make babies. I get the feeling that I'm there, watching them, but through this tight filmy spidery web of tension and sorrow. I like that feeling. I hope it gets happy soon.

[thylaslain]

Thanks so much for the comment. It really really is appreciated. :)

God knows I want them to be happy as well. But sometimes, they're just pretty darn STUBBORN. And really, if it were up to me, I would have made them jump each other 5 chapters ago. But no. both of them are being idiotic and stupid. So let's see if they'll co-operate in the next chapter, shall we?

[theshadowlover]

wow. you SO need to finish writing this. it's awesome! so bittersweet...perfect. ^^

and personally, I LIKE the choppiness. sometimes, that's what gives the story the mood you're looking for. it works nicely, here. ^.^

[thylaslain]

Thank you so much. :) I'm glad someone enjoyed it. I'm very experimental in my writing, but I tend to be very deliberate too. It's nice when people pick up on some of the things that I do.

Thanks so much.

Finding The Sun

[anonymous]

Hello =) I've been following your 'Finding The Sun' fanfic and went slightly berserk at the end of Chapter 8...
because I want to know what happens next!!!
*big smiles*
'Finding The Sun' is a great fanfic...the slow build up is excellent for understanding Neji and Hinata's complicated yearning for each other. That takes some pretty skilled story-telling...Your narrative is strong and appears to be evenly paced with a sense of direction. I love finding fanfics that depend on the narrative skill of the author instead of cheap multiple plot twists to captivate the audience.... So please do take it off hiatus soon!! =)I'll be looking forward to chapter 9 on fanfiction!!!!

Regards,
maru-maru

Re: Finding The Sun

[thylaslain]

hey maru-maru! I seemed to have missed this comment of yours completely, and while the chances of you seeing this are nil since you haven't logged on/don't have an lj account, I'd just like to thank you for the lovely lovely comment. I'm so happy that someone out there enjoyed my fic.

Yes, I'm taking it off hiatus as soon as I finish cleaning up this dj (i'm working for a scanlation group). and once that's done, I'm planning to put on the finishing touches for chapter 9 and uploading it. I'm so so sorry it's taking so bloody long, but it happens you know? lol. sadly, yes, sadly, life gets in the way.

[anonymous]

I have read all of your fics now X_______X
I must say that I love this one the best! It's so emotionally wrenching and can you just even put my heart at rest and say it ends all happy? XD you dont even have to write a happy chapter or any more chapters just say it'll be happy ;-;
<3

[thylaslain]

you need a badge dahlin'
Hm. Ends happy.
Hm. Hm. Hm....
we'll see.

:glomp:

p.s. chapters.

[anonymous]

your story is so sad, and I cried so many times! >_<
Please write more =)
I can't wait to read the rest!