[FIC] You and Me - Chapter II

[thylaslain]

You and Me

Overall rating: R - NC-17

Summary: Uchiha Sasuke has returned to Konohagakure. He's changed of course. But so has everything else...

SPOILERS: Up to current in Anime (i.e. Episode 135).
Chapter 2/?
Pairing: Uchiha Sasuke x Uzumaki Naruto Others may be mentioned
Chapter Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Naruto and all related characters (c)

Comments

[starapple]

So many good things about this chapter!

Somehow, looking into the bedroom that used to be his parents’, it felt that all of it - all of the screams and the please, please stop! What are you doing? What are you doing - had spilled out.

I really liked that, like a sudden burst of... mild hysteria, I suppose.

The photo - v. cool. Something in me is rather satisfied at seeing a spooked!Sasuke.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

[thylaslain]

n_n I'm real glad you liked it. The next chapter is finished. I'm just too lazy to put it up. lol.

I love writing Sasuke as something other than the smug bastard he is. it's no fun writing about an emotionless person. it's like:
And then [insert evil villain here] sprung out of no where and set Konoha on fire!! Fire!
Naruto immediately lept into action, performing sloppy jutsus and trying to protect those precious to him.
Sakura cried.
Sasuke...was...Sasuke.

...
hm. maybe not to that extent. lol.