Gin/Hiji - Fever Dreams (2/?)

[tianneh]

Title: Fever Dreams (was previously some other title which for the life of me I can't remember

Comments

[mnemo_syne]

Man this is so cool! I love it.

[tianneh]

Thank you!

[sommar]

wah! so good! I love the way you wrote this chapter, hope your brain won't be dead for too long ^^ want more XD

[tianneh]

Thank you!

Writing sex is terribly daunting - I'm just avoiding it as long as I can :S

[nicotine_gum]

MORE.

[tianneh]

I will try? I'm terribly bad at writing porn, though, and am tempted to continue with 'the morning after'.

[galeaya]

crucial moment. aack!

gin-san's probably watching right now. and drooling. and eating cake. and silently rooting for you to continue so he may molest the ever molest-able oogushi-kun~

[tianneh]

Lol! You've got Gin-san down pat.

sugar is probably an aphrodisiac to him

[galeaya]

and oogushi-kun has a mayo fetish.. XD

I wonder how that would taste.. mayo and sugar, I mean..

---> goes off to try and make a mayo-sugar thinggy...

[anonymous]

Awh brain revive, brain revive!XD

Love the tension crackling in there and your characterization. Gintoki being somewhat smug and knowing ~
Also really really like how there's something to be read between the lines in things they do, or say.

And Kondou and Okita appearance was <3 Oh Okita ~ you would love to hospitalize Hijikata wouldn't you XD