haiku.

May 01, 2006 14:23

"lynsey how i love thee
gold hair, oceanic eyes
i look like a terrorist"

-devon martin.

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devonnation May 1 2006, 19:10:41 UTC
i should have been an english major.

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devonnation May 1 2006, 19:11:35 UTC
ps, my haiku has too many syllables. so i guess that's why i WASN't an english major.

ps i just spelled english, "inglish"

reason 12.

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tiedtothetracks May 2 2006, 15:25:50 UTC
hahaha i thought of that after the fact. 5-7-5, devon. jeesh. haikus are the worst. seriously. poetry=boo.

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devonnation May 2 2006, 15:45:02 UTC
no, the worst is i actually COUNTED syllables. and said 5-7-5. but then i realized, just clapping your hands quietly to the syllables isn't counting. it's clapping. apparently to me, 5 words=5 syllables.

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tiedtothetracks May 3 2006, 20:50:34 UTC
did you have to do that in english class? clap out syllables? i did. and for some reason i vaguely remember thinking i was better at it than everyone else in my class. but that doesnt surprise you now, does it?

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