FIC: Over and Out, NCIS, Tim McGee, PG

[tigerlily0484]

Title: Over and Out
Character(s): Tim McGee, team.
Episode(s): Post S6
Word Count: 1,995.

Summary: Being the lookout can be more trouble than it's worth. Tim's about to find out why.  *NOTE*: this week's challenge was to write a cliffhanger. There might be another part to come, just to resolve things. Stay tuned!

Written for Round 9 of the ncis_lfws  competition

Comments

[katy_moon_beam]

I knew this was you as soon as I read it on the website. Sorry I didn't vote - I thought you had to be part of the comm to do it! Promise to vote in the final :)

The pacing of this story was excellent, and being inside of Tim's head was very apt. If you continue for resolution, I look forward to seeing what happens!

I've missed you.

[caira]

Ouf, yeah, this is good. I like the pace . . . as opposed to the pacing, if that makes any sense.

Also, second? With three people left? How many people started this competition? Reckon you're not doing so bad . . .

[sam_arkand]

There's a good juxtaposition between the underlying tension of the mission and the NCIS cast's light-hearted banted.

[jaxzwolf]

I intended to vote in this round, but I, too didn't realize one doesn't have to be a part of the LFWS community to do so. Eesh. I suck. This was my favorite, and should you choose to post a second installment, I'd be interested in reading. I think you've done a good job with McGee's characteristics, and the descriptions toward the end give the reader the feeling of being just as disoriented and nervous as McGee is.