Comments | tiggy4725: Throw me a life saver, I'm drowning...

tiggy4725

Throw me a life saver, I'm drowning...

Oct 10, 2003 21:52

You are a prairie field ( Read more... )

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isn't that red tree pretty? anonymous October 11 2003, 07:32:01 UTC

Lauren...God that's another example of how amazing you are! I don't understand how anyone can write that well. I guess you have a lot of inspiration though...stupid guys. We really have to hang out sometime SOON. And I can't wait for Wyandotte...PAYPHONE.

See ya tomorrow at the 'regatta'.
Adios amiga. --Amy

anonymous October 12 2003, 11:31:51 UTC

holy shit u are an awsome poem writer!!! jelous!!! lol
p.s i miss u poop #2

~Erika ~

anonymous October 19 2003, 15:49:38 UTC

You, finally free
of my canary calls
my golden sunshine
and roller coaster figure

Great (haha) poem lauren, nice way to be concieted.

tiggy4725 October 19 2003, 16:14:29 UTC

It's only honesty of what the guy said to me. And "canary calls" aren't a compliment just for the record. Maybe if you knew me you'd understand...but you obviously don't.

anonymous October 19 2003, 15:52:03 UTC

It's alright i guess but you shouldnt dillute your poetry with too many metaphors, it gets boring.

tiggy4725 October 19 2003, 16:15:27 UTC

I can use as many metaphores as I want. I don't care if you think it's boring.