Service

[tightshorts]

 Title: Service
Rating: PG

Warnings/Spoilers: Spoilers for episodes 1,4,10, and 11 Pre-Slash Arthur/Merlin, Hinted Merlin/Will, and a woman who may or may not have been a whore.

Summary: Brutus is a vicious dog from hell, Arthur insults thine royal feet, and Merlin thinks about other people while massaging the royal pratness's feet. (Which may or

Comments

[archaeologist_d]

It was very sweet. I liked all the little stories that went with the massages and Arthur's concern at the end. Good job with the story.

I'd highly recommend that you put spaces between the paragraphs. I had a hard time seeing it.

Also, in the tags, I think you need to include rating, genre, and fanfic tags in addition to the 1st time posting tag which you had already. The mods might come after you about it, otherwise.

[tightshorts]

Thank you.
I'll try again with the tags, but when I posted it I did write tags in, I guess they didn't stay...
I'll go space it out, I apologize.

[archaeologist_d]

No need to apologize about the spacing. I just thought you should know. I know a lot of people who won't even read things unless there are spaces.

As for the tags, sometimes they don't stay so it can be a pain. I do know that the merlinxarthur mods are pretty strict about tags. I've had problems with tags as well at times.

[tightshorts]

Thanks for the suggestions.
I went back and spaced it out( The areas where there were supposed to be breaks) and I was able to add some more tags.
Your icon is really adorable.
Any ways, thanks for being so nice. :)

[tetsubinatu]

This was beautiful. I enjoy a good PWP as much as the next person but I also enjoy a fic like this that takes the small details and elaborates on them, giving us a deeper glimpse into the protagonist's heads. I'd like to read more.

[tightshorts]

Oh wow.
Thank you so much. This is somewhat of a PWP, except there will be 3-4 more parts of it. The next part will deal with Merlin getting good at massaging. It will be up on Saturday. I'm really glad you like it, and I promise there will be more.

[kettsin]

Although everyone has already said it, this is really beautiful. I love the views we get of Merlin's past and how he is so characteristically Merlin. How he cares for all the people he massages and is interested in them as people rather than just a patient or something. ^^

I can't wait for the sequel!

(By the way is it alright if I friend you?).

:)

[tightshorts]

(I would love to be friended. I only have 2 friends, and actually there communities.)
The sequel should be up Saturday. It deals with Merlin and how he got into massaging.
I'm glad you like it, and I promise there will be more. :)