falling

Jan 04, 2011 13:48

Title: Falling
Rating: PG
Fandom/Pairing: Football RPS, Cristiano Ronaldo/Kaká
Summary: We fall in different ways until the end.

☆ Every word is a lie.
★ First fic of 2011, happy new year lovelies! Random AU is random (since I can't deal with reality) where everything is abstract and the characters' lives are undefined since it's not important. ( Read more... )

fandom: football, pairing: cron/kaka, !fic, #pg, -one-shot

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sunnyshinee May 15 2011, 07:25:56 UTC
This is just fucking amazing and blew me away. I can't even begin to explain why I found it so good but it should be obvious why, anyway. It's just, gah, such a perfect summary of a couple falling in and out of love and it really hit home. For serious, this is simply beautiful and I think I'll never see a day where you don't blow me away with your prose. The characterisation is elegant and spot-on, too; they really seem defined as CRon and Kaka. Just perfect. ♥

And, if I'm not being too presumptuous here, is it okay if I use this fic as my inspiration for a story? I'll credit you and all, of course. If it's not okay, well, I'll just scrap the idea right away!

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tiivibear May 15 2011, 19:36:58 UTC
You, my friend, exaggerate. But, I am flattered none the less! Uhm, wow. I don't know what to say except thank you. Like always haha! And that I luffs yous ♥ And hopefully I won't ever stop blowing you away hahaha!

Why ofc! I am happy to spread inspiration!

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