life didn't give me much, but if you're here it gets better day by day

Oct 22, 2010 21:47

Title: life didn't give me much, but if you're here it gets better day by day
Rating: PG-13
Fandom/Pairing: Football RPS, Gerard Piqué/Bojan Krkić
Summary: In which Gerard meets Bojan under odd circumstances. AU.

☆ I do not own any of the characters mentioned in the following work of fiction. Any resemblance to reality is purely coincidental.
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fandom: football, !fic, #pg-13, pairing: gerard pique/bojan krkic, -one-shot

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kitty69lover October 22 2010, 20:30:45 UTC
d'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, omg how sweet is this, how impossibly sweet. i love fics where the two are normal people, you know, with crappy paying day jobs and having to struggle and yet find time for some love.

this was awesome. i loved the writing style and what a great side character Fluffy is! <3 as for the boys *gushes* they're so perfect here. well done!!

Bojan and Pique are my OTP and there's such few fics with them, so thank you, from the bottom of my heart.

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tiivibear October 23 2010, 09:48:04 UTC
aw, it's really my pleasure, I loved writing this! =)

haha, oh Fluffy. I needed something like that, otherwise Gerard would seem too lonely and then he would be too out of character for it to work for me haha.

Thank you ♥

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frescato_monkey October 23 2010, 00:39:08 UTC
Words cannot describe how much I love this!
I love Gerard in this and Bojan and the cat and the pace and the wording and... just... all of it! <3
Did i mention how much i loved this? I feel i need to keep saying.

Okay, i'm done gushing now. But I am going to read it again...~

(i love it! <3)

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tiivibear October 23 2010, 09:55:06 UTC
haha, glad you liked it! thank you ♥

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bossbadger October 23 2010, 04:52:11 UTC
SQUEEEEE. This is so, so sweet. I love it. LOVE it.

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tiivibear October 23 2010, 09:56:04 UTC
thank you ♥

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chrisy1108 October 23 2010, 05:05:36 UTC
wow,really,wow! that was so warm and sweet and touching...great story! make me thinking what happened to Pique and Bojan behind the things that we can see...or behind the bedroom door:P It's great to leave some space for imagination! They are both so adorable. Thank you for bring us such a lovely story. I really really enjoyed it.

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tiivibear October 23 2010, 10:00:12 UTC
no problem, I loved writing it! =) thank you for reading and commenting ♥

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afrostedlemon October 23 2010, 12:05:15 UTC
Literally two scrolls before I found this story I sat there and complained to my friend about how there isn't enough Bojan/Piqué fiction out there. Which is kind of hard to understand, because they make a cute couple. Then I found this. :)
I really like this story, the interaction between Gerard and Bo and the way their relationship progresses. The only thing that disappointed me is that it is already over. :/
I hope you'll be writing more Bojan/Piqué, because lord knows we're too short on good B/P fics.

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tiivibear October 23 2010, 19:16:21 UTC
IKR? I don't understand it either. really, they do :3 I really love their height difference hee~ Bojan looks like a midget next to Gerard haha.

aw bb, haha. I may write a sequel/companion-piece since I would like to explain a bit more of Bojan's life as homeless... not to mention that I fell in love with this verse quite terribly and wouldn't mind re-visiting it ='3 (we'll see though, this is my favourite fic that I've written so far and wouldn't like to ruin it since sequels have a tendency to do just that)

Glad you liked it, thank you so much ♥ btw, your icon = so so qt ♥~~

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afrostedlemon October 23 2010, 21:37:55 UTC
I absolutely agree! I actually had the idea for a fic a few days ago and although it's not supposed to have Gerard and Bojan as center couple, they're the sole couple I really see in my head. They just fit so so so well. I hope I'll manage to write that down actually.

And well, if you want I can read over it if you finish it and could give my two pence on whether it would be Lion King 2 or Pocahontas 2. (Actually I just really want to read more. :D). I like the idea of a mute character, it kind of has something. Is Gerard only mute? And maybe it'd be interesting why he can't talk.

And thanks. Slowly starting to gatther more Barca/PK/Bojan Icons. ^^

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tiivibear October 24 2010, 12:30:13 UTC
tbh, I kinda slash Bojan with everyone XD HE JUST FITS WITH SO MANY PEOPLE :D

and ugh, I hate when you have an idea stuck in your head but it never gets down on paper. Like, it's there and all, but when you sit down to write it, nothing comes out. good luck with the fic!

That could actually work! :D I'm gonna friend ya and if I do write it, I'll message it to you, alright? =)

I've actually never seen the sequels lol. so, which one is good? XD

a mute character is really interesting. It's so different in the sense of expressing their thoughts and opinions since you only really have body language to work with. You know, if they don't write down what they would be saying, of course. regarding Gerard's character, it would be interesting to see if he was mute by nature or by choice. we'll see what I'll come up with, it's kinda hectic in school right now D;

oh, I want more football icons in general seeing as I've only got one XD

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