Comments | tijuanagringo: I need the struggle to feel alive

tijuanagringo

I need the struggle to feel alive

Nov 17, 2016 20:33

I need the struggle to feel alive
Sometimes it is not enough ( Read more... )

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lordrexfear November 18 2016, 17:59:08 UTC

What I love about this is how it can be so broad. We don't know who she was. Mother, sister, lover, friend. We just know and we feel.

tijuanagringo November 18 2016, 18:22:05 UTC

:-)

ellison November 19 2016, 23:59:59 UTC

Oh wow, very compelling!

compelling tijuanagringo November 22 2016, 20:58:51 UTC

Thank you !

dmousey November 20 2016, 14:59:42 UTC

Hugs and peace! ~~~D

tijuanagringo November 22 2016, 20:59:13 UTC

Right back at you (((((hug)))))

uselesstinrelic November 21 2016, 07:22:25 UTC

I love the line about the bleach. Though now, admittedly, I've got Moody Blues stuck in my head.

bleach and blues tijuanagringo November 22 2016, 20:59:48 UTC

oh yeah the Moodies are almost always echoing around my brain.

penpusher November 21 2016, 13:05:20 UTC

A moody, if not somewhat familiar poem.

familiar tijuanagringo November 22 2016, 21:01:19 UTC

Yeah, that did bother me a bit, even like that horrible word cliche bothered me when I wrote this, but I decided hell, what the heck, I wrote it in response to the topic, so for good or for ill, here I go.