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[tijuanagringo]

A QUICK PIECE OF MICRO-FICTION

Comments

[uselesstinrelic]

Hm... I have places my mind goes, but once again, I like not knowing.

[uselesstinrelic]

The thing I find out when I read or write micro fiction is it leaves a thousand doors open and demands the reader invent them or or go to read something else, something longer, with more story and meat on its bones. But I must also confess I am strictly speaking an amateur writer since I have published only a little. Oh dear. Now I went somewhere with my mind and told you waht may bee yew don't went two no. Nose. Sorry, but you inspire me at this moment.

[tijuanagringo]

Yeah.

[tijuanagringo]

I AM STILL NOT SURE IF THE ANONYMOUS ROBOT LET THIS GET THROUGH

The thing I find out when I read or write micro fiction is it leaves a thousand doors open and demands the reader invent them or or go to read something else, something longer, with more story and meat on its bones. But I must also confess I am strictly speaking an amateur writer since I have published only a little. Oh dear. Now I went somewhere with my mind and told you waht may bee yew don't went two no. Nose. Sorry, but you inspire me at this moment.

[static_abyss]

I love the tone of this piece. You really set the mood quickly and managed to convey a lot of emotion in a small piece of writing.

[tijuanagringo]

Micro fiction demands fast Fast FAST and quick deep feeling. Or am I only guessing after words hee hee hee hee hee . . .

[rayaso]

I love the idea of micro fiction. This was a great example. You accomplished a lot in so few words.

[tijuanagringo]

Thanks! Am glad you enjoyed.

[marlawentmad]

It is like peeking through a keyhole.

[tijuanagringo]

That is an excellent metaphor for this tiny genre. Thanks!

[halfshellvenus]

I so much want to know the context here of who was killed and why the nails are so threatening. This was very evocative.