Comments | tijuanagringo: impossible

tijuanagringo

Oct 20, 2019 20:18

Impossible he said on the edge of delirium expecting ( Read more... )

Comments 17

static_abyss October 25 2019, 00:52:29 UTC

The second stanza really gripped me. That sort of bold declaration and then fast backtrack really resonated with me. I love your poetry.

tijuanagringo October 25 2019, 01:57:31 UTC

I am honored you read and comment. Thank you.

bleodswean October 25 2019, 16:09:25 UTC

Wow! Fantastic. That last stanza!!

rayaso October 27 2019, 22:50:59 UTC

Excellent work. I loved the pace and flow of this.

murielle October 28 2019, 08:20:11 UTC

Brilliant!

"...so many thanks for such sheer gift of time and conscience..." I love this!

Beautiful work! It's so great to read you again! :-)

quiltingdragon October 28 2019, 16:49:08 UTC

Very interesting. I agree that it reminds me of Auden as well.